Review Detail of fiction_bystander in The Ultimate Support Character
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All in all most of it is great. my only problem is not in the novel itself but your other 18+ work, the difference between them is heaven and Earth and I can't help but to compare them and get disappointed, he has very thing a badass mc should be in a more realistic world but the other is but a boiled eggs, bland and tasteless, I'm not saying it is bad or anything, just that the mc doesn't give any unique qualities where one can get hooked and be interested on knowing more and or join the mc and his endeavors in his path towards a goal of a lifetime. Just my opinion, everybody has different taste, some like it some just doesn't for no reason.
The Ultimate Support Character
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Well, the two was vastly different from each other. Ruki's past was laid out from the very beginning so we all know why is he doing those things while in here, Daisuke's past and true identity was the ongoing mystery that was slowly being unraveled as the story progressed. I get that it will be harder to relate to him when we don't know what's really driving him. For now, he's doing it for the girls. But what will happen when his memories finally came back? That's the idea I'm running here.