Rojikku
Universe-tier writer. I like making and reading beautiful and cute things. I also violently misuse words as appropriate.If you grew since I rated your novel, and needa raise your rating, reply to it.
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Ehhh .. Really they should have invested a few silver in better wheel barrows designed not to tip. Maybe with two wheels. Because this was inevitable.
Have you never heard of the question mark?
Decimate is a great word. It sounds very cool. But it means to reduce by one tenth, and is thus not appropriate for many situations.
Servant
Gazed. .
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... Common.
. .. Hurriedly.
Well. The milky way is large enough to find another place to live. If it's not, he's going to need a massively sustainable food supply or a better way to locate another place to live, regardless. So that would be so what. Also one of the reviews said these were things were altered from the original, which had more difficult scientific concepts, and was harder to translate.
One, that doesn't answer the question. For two.. Ard you talking about physical height? What?
. .. What? Is this English?
Well more importantly the conclusion was that she has enough energy as if she's meditates for ten years. Probably something that will be revealed later.. .though you might know since this comment is old.
Selfish has evolved into selfishness!
I wanted to take off a star for update stability, but I won't bully the author. It's a good book. It has sufficient chapters out to immerse yourself in, and the characters personalities are right up my alley. The grammatical errors decrease drastically throughout the book. In the beginning I noticed a lot, but I just ignored them. Eventually the author learned the difference between its and it's, or stopped using them, because I didn't see the issue again after ... The first volume, maybe? There's still typos and flaws, but I'm a bad reader and didn't point them all out. Sorry. It makes the book less enjoyable if I do that. I get annoyed. As I said, I enjoyed it greatly. MC is uncaring, the girl becomes a bit of a yandere. There's sufficient mystery and foreshadowing. There were several events that felt drawn out and annoying at times, when the MC wasn't getting his way. But I'm pretty sure that's a mark of good writing? I haven't decided, but it definitely means you have investment if you feel that. Later on, I don't remember feeling it as much, but there's still a lot we're waiting to learn and see. I encourage cultured people to read this book. It's disappointing if I'm the only comment that understands a joke.
Mm. I caught up author. My theories about the religion were wrong. My theory about Olivia looks like it might be right. But I'm concerned you're the type to say they're natural enemies for some reason or another. I've seen enough coincidences to know he was almost definitely influenced in his previous life by the same presence influencing him in this one. Though I guess I shouldn't foolishly assume who that is. Is the Overlord is the hidden faction, and he hid himself intentionally, there's probably some reason or enemy. A story where the boss cleans up the Lord's every now and then seems a bit simple for your taste...Well, besides the obvious of Lucius resisting it all. Which presumably has some special outcome. Still, enjoyable. It's a shame I caught up.