Reviews of The Modern Soul as Gregor Cleane (GOT) (ASOFAI)

bro I'm only asking you for one thing,pls don't drop this fic 🙏 the idea of the plot is very interesting for sure 👍. An mc with the body of the Gregor Clegane and a mind from the modern times would mix pretty well for sure, only other mc who had that advantage would be those who got a super soldier serum wish cliche from other fics. Only other ff that got my full attention like this would be Twins " the Ladder" ff with Petyr Baelish as mc with a balanced gaming system

Only 3 chapters but im already looking forward to reading more

a wonderful novel you got here author it has a great potential to grow more even though it has only 3 chapters for now I give you 5⭐ this one is added to my library even though I'm a free reader your story is great👌😊👍 hoping for more to read I wish you good health 🙏

The Mountain's Range, This is a already completed fic on fanfiction hvfyutdfu78o78iygiuyh098y089y98y9087y08y98g9ug9ugu9oig9ugyuifgvuigggfffffffffffffffffffff

Well, honestly? Too stupid fantasies. Completely stupid actions, and if your story was even a little like the original, he would be punished 10 times. And your intelligence agent looks more like a stupid schoolboy

This Ser Gregor Clegane is more of a dog than the original one. The only difference is that he is 'Good' and everything about this story is a fantasy 'good' ending. Admit it, the only reason people loved GOT was because it was dark, gory, and somewhat realistic to the medieval ages. I hate only good doing MCs, so it's upto you if you like this story or not. Writing Quality: 4 Update: 3 All else: 1

It’s an okay story. Not great, not terrible. For me personally, it’s too much of a “white knight” type of story. When I saw “Gregor clegane” in the title, this is not what I was expecting. MC loves the sound of his own voice, and projecting his world views of right and wrong. He saves anyone and anything he deems good. Just not my cup of tea, but it’s worth checking out.

This is just a copy of "The Mountain's Range" by The Passionate Admiral. Just go to fanfiction or google it if you want the whole story faster. This was completed 2018.

if yall are bothered search up ”The Passionate Admiral” and youll see this work completed on fanfiction net

Mc with Hero Complex

This story devolved into unnecessary cringe

There are 2 things that I hate in this story: -The fact that all things go according to the mc's plan. -And how he wants to be part of literally everyone's life, how he wants to 'fix' everything.

The story idea has so much potential. The execution is lacking. The MC seems to be someone with a hero complex and no depth. Many judgements seemed to be made out of pure emotion and logic, even when the mc has no emotional stake on the table. The MC character development and background development is seriously lacking. And at some points you might even wonder whether the mc was actually a CIA agent in his past life of just a teenager with serious hero syndrome. This is more like a wish fulfilment than anything else.

pretty decent story but that's all, there's a lot of plot holes, stupidity and all but pretty decent with pretty consistent updates. so why the low star? because this is a story about some hero wannabe in a GOT, you like that? good for you if not, then this fic is pretty annoying and boring for you

good, although the author is not neutral and likes to turn ordinary characters into saints of goodness and wisdom, but it is very good and I read it all in one go, 5 stars easy, but I mean I can change the grade depending on how he handles it the Frey house, the Freys are a house that doesn't bother anyone and just stays on their property charging minding their own business, I know they charge a high tax from the people but it's still their noble freedom, if the author wants to make walder frey a super villain I'm going to give a low score, after all walder is one of the best administrators in the kingdom

I'll give this a 5star review, I don't remember giving many, but here I find no reason to shave some off it. Well written, good character design, absolutely great pace, the story doesn't feel fast but is quite quick paced. As it is a fic it doesn't linger on things already explained extensively in the original books but rather expands on the additions and modifications brought by the author. I quite like it honestly. Now if you'll excuse me, I'm gonna go check if author-san has other works :)

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its pretty good. ive seen no spelling or grammar mistakes so far. although i feel like it would be better if you followed the "show not tell" technique.