Review Detail of Pekokopiko in The Modern Soul as Gregor Cleane (GOT) (ASOFAI)

pretty decent story but that's all, there's a lot of plot holes, stupidity and all but pretty decent with pretty consistent updates. so why the low star? because this is a story about some hero wannabe in a GOT, you like that? good for you if not, then this fic is pretty annoying and boring for you