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Honestly I just recently discovered you and I have to say it was a really great read. Keep up the great work. Only complaint comes from the smut to story progression, you constantly go from small smut that isn’t really great smut to a info dump that makes it feel like I’m reading a translation. You should check out Cambrians work for inspiration. He has really good smut with story.
Honestly I’m more worried about your health and the rate you put out chs. Take care to not burn your self out writing these and start to dislike writing altogether. Otherwise great work
I think if he was as smart as he says he is, it wouldn’t be hard to hide a tracker from detection.
You know that’d be a cool Easter egg dragon flying around Skyrim. Demanding stones or perish. Only for people to pick up a stone from the ground and moving on.
You would think so but there are always idiots. There’s always going to be rough patches with new tec, things to learn from experience etc. It’s happened with everything we created. How else would they know to silence? did they ask him? Can the device even work in the storage unit? Is the oasis secure for them? If an enemy ninja gets a phone and uses it is every pic they post available to see, every conversation, every action? Think about it and you can see it’s fallacy’s. You’re thinking in 2010 when everyone has a phone and knows about its dangers. You need to be thinking in early 2000s and late 90s when it was just a shiny convenient tec.
They don’t know about any of that. Since it’s a new tec they don’t understand the dangers associated with it. Think before you write
When they are in missions and need to be stealthily and all of a sudden they get a call from their relatives. Or they spill some secret to them thinking it’s no big deal and later on it is, operational security is a real thing and people have unknowingly said or posted something that have backfired spectacularly
Yea that’s not a good thing
Imma just check on my embershard crew before I commit them to the mines
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