Well, honestly? Too stupid fantasies. Completely stupid actions, and if your story was even a little like the original, he would be punished 10 times. And your intelligence agent looks more like a stupid schoolboy
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LIKE???? Did we even read the same story? The MC was very prudent with his actions until he was free from Tywin. Only exception would be when he saved Elia Martell and her children. After being free from Tywin the MC did let loose but with good reason. As for the Lyanna Stark part, there was practically no further risk at all considering that he had already previously helped Elia.
?, he spoke out of turn at every possible opportunity and was never punished for his actions, not a single time, never had a plan backfired him or caused any noticeable problem, that's just BS at every turn.
MadFool:???? Did we even read the same story? The MC was very prudent with his actions until he was free from Tywin. Only exception would be when he saved Elia Martell and her children. After being free from Tywin the MC did let loose but with good reason. As for the Lyanna Stark part, there was practically no further risk at all considering that he had already previously helped Elia.