Reviews of The adventures of my isekai life

I am not much experienced but one thing i am sure of is that the concept of my novel is unique and interesting, so please read my novel and if you have any suggestion then let me know and please be honest.

I'm a sucker for isekai novels, and this one is great. I like the concept so far; it is easy to get into, and it hooked me from the start. I suggest you to give a try if you enjoy the Isekai genre.

Hello author, I really loved your work especially how you improved so much in such short span of time. The people who says that your grammer is not good probably just copy pasting the same comment as the previous people, they don't know how much you have improved. So, keep on the good work and keep improving, I am with you.

Wow this book so soothing even with some few chapters it makes more sense than some with an hundred of chapter with nothing. Cool..............

The plot is great and it is a nice novel. With a little grammar here and there. But in general, it is great. Keep updating, would love to journey with Dev Sharma.

I don't read isekai but this one got me hooked from the beginning. I specially like the starting and the concept of the story.[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Not a big fan of isekais haha, although, i have been proven wrong with the imaginations the author provided for this book. Try and work on the grammar, and your book will be a complete W Goodluck on your journey fellow author.

Hi!. So... I gave this book a five star rating because it's very interesting, I've never read any book with this concept and idea but so far it has been fun reading it... Kudos to the author 👍🏾👍🏾👍🏾.

Not really a fan of isekei novels, but this one didn't disappoint. The story is exciting, and the author is doing a great job by putting in so much effort one can clearly see. Keep it up.

I have read little of this genre but each work is a masterful staging of battles, so detailed, with exaggerated skills of the protagonist, and this one brings: cunning, tricks, strategies. A true warrior, sagacious, intrepid, hidden, patient, trained in battles that wins in death or the animal state that he had to live after suicide.

Not a bad piece of work but not entirely great. You need to work better on the flow of things and grammar. The plot is interesting and I get where you're going with it. Don't give up on this, there is potential in this. Keep going!

its a lovely book no doubt about it keep it up and please update more . its very interesting , and I love it the author did a good job , well done

Good story so far with the three chapters available at this review time. Love the characters designs and would love to see how the story progresses 👍

Well this was nice..though it doesn’t feel like the mc is rlly suicidal or anything. It feels like it was just thrown in there as an afterthought for edginess

Author, author, author. Your book has so much potential. Your plot is good, and your stability of updates is more stable than my life(lol). I'm sorry but I couldn't read past chapter 2. I couldn't understand it and the grammar wasn't readable. I'll list some things that you can correct in your novel. Remember, I'm not trying to insult you, I'm trying to help you as a fellow writer and reader because what a beginner writer needs are some encouragement and some tips! 1. The grammar: I can tell you that a good story NEEDS good grammar. You need to study grammar if you want to get better at writing, so your readers understand. And please space your paragraphs, it's hard to read big paragraphs. Use Grammarly wherever possible. 2. The synopsis and the book cover: Now that's something you have to research from other novels of your genre and make a book cover! I can help you with that, ping me on discord: daylightmoon123445#3037 and I can help you with a book cover and synopsis. 3. The world-building: I especially like the unusual use of names and it seems quite familiar to me since I'm an Indian myself. But you need to create a stable world and not change the words because I'm seeing some change here and there. But that's all I have. If you have any help or trouble, just contact me via discord but overall, this story isn't so bad.

What a serious start! That was truly admirable. This is gonna be one of my favourites. Hope the author will upload morr since I like to read this more. Keep going.We support you...❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️[img=update][img=recommend]

Hi author, I found out it's quite a good piece of writing......the book is engaging and keeps you hooked for a while. I love to read more about DEV's journey......

The story has a great start, a little iffy about the mc being suicidal and the grammar could be better, but otherwise still amazing. Keep up the great work!! ^^