Review Detail of Kyrell in The adventures of my isekai life
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Not a bad piece of work but not entirely great. You need to work better on the flow of things and grammar. The plot is interesting and I get where you're going with it. Don't give up on this, there is potential in this. Keep going!
The adventures of my isekai life
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A little help, if you are writing on laptop there is a free program called Grammarly that will help you with editing
AKHIL_GOYAL:Thank you, actually, the editing of ch 3 is going on and can I have your thoughts after my editing?