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AKHIL_GOYAL

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2022-08-15 JoinedIndia
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    I really loved your story and how it developed, it is a good plot. The character development is good and the overall story is also good, keep writing.

    altalt
    STRANGERS- FAR FROM HOME
    Horror · FA3zy
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Replied to Demons_and_I

    So are you saying fill the first chapter with a whole lot of information rather than providing the readers with the feel of the story? This novel is not about that bro, it is about our mc exploring a whole new world, and as we travel with our mc we may get to learn many new things and information as you mentioned. The other thing you mentioned, 'grammar' I guess you have a quite unique concept of it

    altalt
    The unknown world where I was summoned
    Fantasy · AKHIL_GOYAL
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    Hello dear author, I really like the thought that you put into this novel. I also like the world-building you put in. The only thing I would say is that if you can try making it more interesting because I just feel a whole lot of information in your novel.

    altalt
    God Ash: Remnants of the fallen.
    Action · Demons_and_I
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    I really loved the story. This novel has become my new favorite. I really loved how deep the author thought about the emotions and concepts in this novel. I wish to see more updates in the future and all the best.

    altalt
    The Villain's Magic (Dropped)
    Fantasy · hibiscus_lamp
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Commented

    WOW, it's just wow. I love it.

    Ch 1 Prologue: Light
    altalt
    The Villain's Magic (Dropped)
    Fantasy · hibiscus_lamp
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Replied to hibiscus_lamp

    Thank you

    altalt
    The unknown world where I was summoned
    Fantasy · AKHIL_GOYAL
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Replied to Biva

    Thank you

    altalt
    The unknown world where I was summoned
    Fantasy · AKHIL_GOYAL
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    Hello dear author I like your writing style and the start of the novel is really great. I like the action sequence in this novel. The only thing I would say to improve is your plot and your long dialogue because sometimes long dialogue scenes interrupt the flow of a scene. Keep doing the great work. Hope for future updates.

    altalt
    Desires of the Wavering Heart
    Urban · Biva
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    Your novel is really amazing and interesting. I really love both main characters and want to know more in the future.

    altalt
    Miss Troublemaker
    Urban · Lee_Hazel
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    A very great book. Really loved the plot and the development. The characters were also really good, I hope to see more in the future updates, keep developing................................................................................................

    altalt
    REINCARNATED IN A WONDERLAND
    Fantasy · glitzywrite
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    A really good story. I like how the plot develops. I am not a fan of cultivation novels but this novel is really good. I like how the brothers take care of each other. I like to see the future updated of this novel.

    altalt
    Not Available. No reason to read.
    LGBT+ · Urcrayontastic
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    Very great plot and a really great work. Loved your concept about the alpha fisher. I like how the story develops and like to see future of this novel.

    altalt
    Alpha Marina's Dying Mate and Their Human Beta
    Fantasy · kerryn
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    A very great wort, I really like the concept and the character design. The concept used was really great and the characters were also good. I like to see more in the future updates.

    altalt
    Rebirth : Fixing up Love
    Urban · Altansarnai
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    A very great book, I really like how the story progresses, and how the character of this story develops. I hope to see future works from your side.

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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    A very good novel, I like how the plot develops, and it is a very good read it kept you hooked. I really like the story, awaits for future updates.

    altalt
    Mutant in a suit
    Sci-fi · O_Daniel
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    A very good and different story. I really like the introduction part and how the flow of the story goes. I really hope to see more of your work in future.

    altalt
    conceptds
    History · f0011
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Commented

    I really loved the introduction

    Ch 1 A beautiful dream
    altalt
    conceptds
    History · f0011
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    Hello author, I really liked your work and I really loved how the story progressed and I really like the character design and I await for further updates

    altalt
    Trashed 08
    Fantasy · Nature_Lover18
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    I really loved your novel. Your writing style is very unique and I really like to follow your story and keep up your good work and looking forward to future updates.

    altalt
    Go Home a Like Turtle
    History · GenXPrays
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  • AKHIL_GOYAL
    AKHIL_GOYAL1yr
    Posted

    Very nice story, I loved your plot and how you define your characters and your concept of astral realm, I really am looking forward to the progress of this story and keep on the good work.

    altalt
    House of Shadows (No more)
    Horror · Kyrell
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