Review Detail of daylightmoon123445 in The adventures of my isekai life

Author, author, author. Your book has so much potential. Your plot is good, and your stability of updates is more stable than my life(lol). I'm sorry but I couldn't read past chapter 2. I couldn't understand it and the grammar wasn't readable. I'll list some things that you can correct in your novel. Remember, I'm not trying to insult you, I'm trying to help you as a fellow writer and reader because what a beginner writer needs are some encouragement and some tips! 1. The grammar: I can tell you that a good story NEEDS good grammar. You need to study grammar if you want to get better at writing, so your readers understand. And please space your paragraphs, it's hard to read big paragraphs. Use Grammarly wherever possible. 2. The synopsis and the book cover: Now that's something you have to research from other novels of your genre and make a book cover! I can help you with that, ping me on discord: daylightmoon123445#3037 and I can help you with a book cover and synopsis. 3. The world-building: I especially like the unusual use of names and it seems quite familiar to me since I'm an Indian myself. But you need to create a stable world and not change the words because I'm seeing some change here and there. But that's all I have. If you have any help or trouble, just contact me via discord but overall, this story isn't so bad.