jdbeue
I love first-person pov and I absolutely adore cultivation books. Although this took me a lil time to catch, but honestly, this is a good book! He got an op cheat system at the start, there's reincarnation and he isn't the goody two shoes (let's admit it, that's always a good thing) The only thing that threw me off is that, for some reason, Mc is the only one being targeted. From his father to his teacher (-_-) But moving past that, this, although follows the cliche reincarnation troupe, felt fresh! Absolutely recommended! You go JDB!
well, the story is well written...kudos for not writing that it english is not your first language and the readers have to put up with it...seeing this a lot lately on webnovel. However, a significant part that keeps us invested (atleast me) is the journey of the character...his struggles, learnings,emotions etc But here, the character is literary led by nose by the system and then a creature who incubated within the mc...even the initial mystry is something everybody knows but is taboo to let the MC know...ridiculously far fetched...and then this is combined with some wierd system features ( eg. skills/stats) which are then converted as per whims... Hence i quit. But this could have been a great story...
hmm mc raises his cultivation but no increase in stats? he sold his pills for way too much spirit coins that the author make it seems barely any clan can afford it but there are many who were in the foundation realm and beyond. ps it was stated cultivators cant advance without a pill. there are a bunch more discrepancies that i cant ignore it anymore. dropped at chapter 60+
Love the story! But I actually can't understand the comments, people keep saying MC is so bad omg he is so weak garbage and trash and this novel is bad, when the MC is in pain or just been taken from his world and family. I dont really know what to say because the MC like this just seems more human and relatable to me, if you were to end up in a situation like this you would obv freak out and be heartbroken by the fact you can't see your friends and family and if your bones were breaking from doing this art you would cry and want to stop because the pain from breaking bones no human being can just ignore or "go through the pain" unless you have adrenaline and even then thats a stretch. all in all i really like this novel as the MC feels relatable and the pacing is nice and the writing and grammar is good. gj auther :)