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Cvpro1yrCommentedso I guess the Alchemist or rather weapon forgers would use soul to ignite fire, hammer the weapon, quench etc....i am not even sure whether to continue
Cultivators on the Heavenly Martial Continent were basically divided into martial cultivators and alchemy cultivators. The former mainly focused on the cultivation of Qi while a small number of them specialized in the cultivation of flesh—the so-called common warriors. The latter focused mainly on the cultivation of the soul, and they were precisely the alchemists. Each of the three corresponded to the spirit, energy, and soul of a human respectively, and no matter which one reached the peak, an individual could become a mighty figure who shook the entire continent.- Cvpro1yrCommented
and what would he call this...pill concocting
"It is truly the number one body-tempering technique under the heavens, for it has given me a body that is stronger than the one cleansed with a ninth-grade spirit medicine. Now, with the physique of an apprentice warrior, I can start experimenting with some simple concoctions. As long as I can produce some low-level medicinal pills, my cultivation speed can be further accelerated!" - Cvpro1yrCommented
ha ha...why do we even have a novel in the first place....the mc can defeat even sovereign without cultivating ..he just has to sigh at the end ...this body
After succeeding with the move, Yunxiao threw himself at Hezheng and squatted slightly before slamming his right shoulder into the other's chest. - Cvpro1yrCommented
so....no weapon refiner ....artifact refiner...blacksmith... rune smith....but alchemy ?... boy ..hope the story ahead is engaging...
'The crafting of weapons? Ha! I'm a ninth-tier emperor-grade alchemist of the Heavenly Martial Continent! Who in the world but those few undying old fogies would dare to speak of the methods of weapon crafting in front of me?' - Cvpro1yrCommented
are we going to introduce cellphones and televisions now. The story should have appropriate tags...
"Okay, how about this? We'll just take a pair of binoculars and watch from afar. That should be okay, right?" interjected Su Jingxing again. - Cvpro1yrCommented
Trucks...???? as in they run on petrol /diesel
Every day, there would be trucks going back and forth between these towns and Qinghe City. - Cvpro1yrCommented
what is the difference between robbing of cultivation and crippling?
These people strictly guarded the secret martial arts manuals. If they discovered that someone had secretly practiced them, they would either rob them of their cultivation or cripple them, and in worse cases, silence them. - Cvpro1yrCommented
Thank god....it doesn't have 30 - 40 steps...or else he would already be the strongest
That amount of power was enough to wound or even kill a seventh-grade martial artist, let alone a ninth-grade one. - Cvpro1yrCommented
where are the spirit stones...
Although the job required him to deal with corpses, it provided food and accommodation, as well as a monthly salary of a thousand Great Yu dollars. The original Su Jingxing was very satisfied. - Cvpro1yrCommentedCh 375 Auspicious Beast Egg
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oh...an in-built alarm system
Fang Chen has been sleeping for two hours. He was woken up by the system as he told it to wake him after two hours. After waking up he saw that the shop was still empty, he sighed and went to bathe. - Cvpro1yrCommented
A good grammar may not make a story likable but a bad grammar certainly makes it unlikable
Fang Chen was seething in anger. He thought he had finally got a customer, who could have thought that the first customer to came into the shop was a condescending young master. He thought, "Looks like this day will also go without a customer. why my luck is so bad? First the position of the shop and a bad customer. Should I even call him a customer?" - Cvpro1yrCommented
yes...author really needs to work on grammar....
"It is your choice if you want to buy anything or pawn anything. Did I force you to buy from my shop? Why are you making a ruckus? If you don't want anything to leave, Why are you disturbing me?" - Cvpro1yrCommentedCh 366 Youth Gathering
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Hey,... the novel has decent start, however, found the following issues ( which others may not find )... 1. Language too casual for a xianxia setting....like people giving call, use of babe, honey, using fork and knife... this may fit in a novel in another genre, but found it difficult to accept in this genre. 2. The MC is too casual. All the women in the story are just because the MC could fuck them 3. Just because it is R 18+ does not mean a sex chapter after 10 -15 chapters ( many a times even less). There has to be some difference compared to a porn novel So dropping it...
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are there cell phones now !!! will have to drop as it seems that the author is way too casual with world building
She stood up from her chair and said, "Father, we are going to Snow Land, I will call you later!" - Cvpro1yrPosted
well, the story is well written...kudos for not writing that it english is not your first language and the readers have to put up with it...seeing this a lot lately on webnovel. However, a significant part that keeps us invested (atleast me) is the journey of the character...his struggles, learnings,emotions etc But here, the character is literary led by nose by the system and then a creature who incubated within the mc...even the initial mystry is something everybody knows but is taboo to let the MC know...ridiculously far fetched...and then this is combined with some wierd system features ( eg. skills/stats) which are then converted as per whims... Hence i quit. But this could have been a great story...
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Hey,...you have repeated this so many times. We all know from the first time that he is someone powerful and important.
"Well then. There is no need to go all the way back there. I am not in the mood to go through all the procedures of giving you a few skill books that everyone in the kingdom has access to. Here, just take these and scram. Everyone has a copy anyways, and I have no need for mine." Old Tian took out a set of books and handed them to me. He seemed to have a spatial ring of his own, and I looked at this with interest. Since when did a mere guard have a spatial ring? I knew that he was more powerful than he showed, and every time I encountered him, my suspicions were further confirmed.