I like how there's almost no grammatical errors in this novel, which is rare. Hmm maybe author has editor. The plot is good. System is good. The worst thing here is mc's character. At first, he complains a lot. Why do I say a lot? Well he can try to think first before asking questions that anyone can figure out. After mc got bettrr and now doesn't complain that much, ( until chap 40, that's where I stop ) he became arrogant and complacent. Then that was fixed he got wake up call. Even so, he'll still act like that. He also doesn't have that much patience. Also, you want to make the mc's background mysterious but how was it executed wasn't right. It's over the place. There's so much extra words when you're trying to explain his background which isn't contributing well to the story. It's like you just have to say "no". But you said so much already. Thank u for the novel but I'm bored now but keep on improving.

Yea, please REALLY make it right! You keep on saying u know what to do but you're too atupud for real. Come on man, use your brain a little.

Too much complaining is gone now which is good. Now, mc needs additional stats in intelligence cause he's not thinking deeply now before taking action. Like now just because he's fighting mobs he becoming arrogant. Please do something.

Me cursing at who made the mc like this. Everytime he talks, complain is more than content. 😀

You have a point there. Maybe it's different like stats of body and qi and soul.

Just skip the mc's dialogue once he starts complaining. That's what I do. My headache lessen.

It's good that mc's character is improving now. Lesser complain or nonsense cursing and he's thinking more now before acting.

Yea right, most of the author's in this app usually makes a dumb mc. It's rare to see someone with good character and not a reckless one. Even though they know readers don't like that kind of attitude, they still do it. Well, nothing we can do, it's their story after all.

Please do something about the mc's character! He's been cultivating for a month but his brain is still like that of a child? I hope author prioritize this cause it's a big flaw of the story to have a lot of readers. I'm starting to get annoy too.

I hope mc's character will get better as story progress. Aside from that, everything ia good for me. Keep it up!

I don't like this missy here

Interesting..

Some of the words use in the construction of a sentence doesn't fit. So it sounds ridiculous sometimes. The novel was good at first but I don't know it became a mess after his meeting with Felicity. I tried to keep on reading but I guess, this isy limit. The mc's character which is changing a lot is the worst for me. Sorry, since I'm having a headache now reading it. Gonna stop here. Still thanks for the earlier chapters.

hmm

Special products? Maybe modelling while naked lol