Shade_Arjuun
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Shade_Arjuun4dPostedInteresting read. I think it's cool that we get the hook to the story through Cero getting a unique skill that isn't a quantified damage skill or fireball or legendary sword from some such. I appreciated that. While I think the writing quality could use some improvement, I think it's alright. The story development is good. There isn't a feeling of stagnancy, but I do feel like starting off with fights and training might not be the best thing for the first two chapters, but of course, I haven't read a lot of the story and can't say with surety that it's a questionable decision. In any case, I think this novel has great potential. Good work so far!
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huge buns is crazy!
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I wish you had given a mini-explanation as to what this is. This early into the story, it wouldn't do to make readers hop to Google. just a thought
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Bro is really hung up on the idea. That's a good sign
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Everything. Everything they both have
"You don't need to give me an answer right now. I didn't hope you would. We have greater concerns at the moment, don't we? Let us focus on those for now. It is in both our best interests if you manage to defeat your other self and with the power that will be produced upon your merge charge against Somanda. I feel what you manifest at that time will be a great starting point," Serenity said. - Shade_Arjuun12dPosted
Solid work! I feel that the pace is a bit too brisk at the beginning, with our MC being chucked into a training arc from the first chapter, but as you read on, the world expands and it all starts to click together. The magic abilities introduced are interesting and I'd day the MC shows an affinity for them that's enough to pique a reader's interest, which is a plus! Great work!
- Shade_Arjuun12dCommented
bruh
"No, moving at 5% of my max speed is invisible to the naked eye," Fuyu explained casually. - Shade_Arjuun13dReplied to Grandmist_GodCh 1155 What Makes It Rich (2)
- Shade_Arjuun16dReplied to JailGooCh 1141 Mors, Serene Grace (1)
- Shade_Arjuun27dReplied to Nissim_YeshuaCh 1144 Weathering The King's Wrath! (2)
- Shade_Arjuun28dReplied to FelipeMontel
Jerthrax
"I know why you killed him first. Indeed, he was already beyond saving, soul-wise, and if he fell into the necromancer's hands…" the Giant paused and a grave look appeared on his face. "You are right. The Scaled Elder was more than just some guardian beast. He was family. He was yet to grow as old, as powerful and as wise as his brother, Jiggorrhax, but he was still a bastion of Edagon and Aigas as a whole. It's a shame his duty now falls onto me and my successor so soon." - Shade_Arjuun28dReplied to FelipeMontel
Indeed. But of course, Replicus doesn't know about that yet.
"I'm afraid it's impossible to claim his soul for any meaningful use. That attack of yours did significant damage. If it weren't for the fact that Caxellac's soul was in a higher league than a normal one, it would have been destroyed. But all the same, its refined fabrics must have been obliterated, which means you can't use it to forge a weapon as you did with the necromancer's." - Shade_Arjuun28dReplied to Percent_Grader
Not. Replicus gathered its essence to form Maximum Catalyst for that time using the evolved Harmonic Ember. It is still the same. I get how that is confusing
Using Spatial Lightning, he teleported himself far away from both the charge of the bulls and Caxellac without forgetting to retrieve his severed arm which held tight the Fallen Reincarnator's Shadow!