Review Detail of Bored_to_the_W0rld in Reincarnated With A System In A Cultivation World

I like how there's almost no grammatical errors in this novel, which is rare. Hmm maybe author has editor. The plot is good. System is good. The worst thing here is mc's character. At first, he complains a lot. Why do I say a lot? Well he can try to think first before asking questions that anyone can figure out. After mc got bettrr and now doesn't complain that much, ( until chap 40, that's where I stop ) he became arrogant and complacent. Then that was fixed he got wake up call. Even so, he'll still act like that. He also doesn't have that much patience. Also, you want to make the mc's background mysterious but how was it executed wasn't right. It's over the place. There's so much extra words when you're trying to explain his background which isn't contributing well to the story. It's like you just have to say "no". But you said so much already. Thank u for the novel but I'm bored now but keep on improving.