dropped? well, gud bai author, hope there will be updates in the future who knows when...

on point, wish for something new

well, although your book have many flaws and i totally agree with some comments on the main page, i'm pretty sure your book is unique and have it's own flavor, not some copy paste story plot. from your thoughts, i can see that you have goals and "bold" perspective for this kind of story...

Poor storage ring, from the beginning I thought nathan put his diary on his ring, i'm quite surprised by this plot hole "revelation" indeed 😔. List of plot hole so far: diary on open space, lark was not killed during dungeon trial, no logical reason his luck seams stagnant on negative value (at this point I believe author gives negative value in order to validate his absurd idea of getting MC to be on pedestal which is sucks), ether being targeted logically should be highlighted by the "author of saga heroes" since it was the main plot line of why leon being targeted. My brain...

hey author, please create some kind of summary chapter that consist of:- power ranks- weapon ranksit will help readers including me to refresh memories, you see i'm at chapter 568 and I already forgot how rare pseudo legendary item is...poor me

typical annoying MC:- generic brainless mc ✅- heaven defying fl as companion ✅- face slapping ✅where is the villain characteristics 😭

yeah, kinda lame

Cih the prologue ruin the story, I believe you will get more fans if not for the prologue...

bruh it's not like he want to rate this book, but in order to "chat" it's compulsory to rate the novel.

wew, only chapter 56 and MC is getting nerfed...well played

bruh of course it is childish, the theme itself is "face slapping"

Nah, I'm already nauseous of this kind of novel...as I said it's all "you guys" choices.

Chihiro hair is actually brown (in anime).

At this rate i'm going to write MC status myself on notepad lol...

I just happy that there's update. As simple as that.

This review is not based on how MC personality became mild, too much rubbish info for word count or etc etc. "I honestly don't care about that, at least for this novel" I just love the fact that I still feel the same intrigue excitement of knowing what will happen next, WW journey for short. I remember of how exciting it was to read this novel 1 and a half years ago and when I came back to continue reading the updated chapters after who knows how long since there's no update, those feelings remain strong.

Yeah the generic this "trash" that "trash" no matter how powerful MC became. Plus face slapping every young master.

Author, It's not like I hate your novel by giving this low star review. I will be honest here, I really want to read your novel and give a good review but right now I'm totally hesitating to read your novel. The reasons: - You have too many incomplete novel and everytime I got hook of the novel you start a new novel and your old novel got forgotten with no updates. This happen thrice and I'm disappointed enough to stop reading your novel altogether. - Inconsistent updates until you drop your novel after all that work you do. You can't stick to a novel until completion and that sucks. I hope this message will enlightened you of why there's many reader hesitating to give a try or spend their time with your novel. Thank you.

This "you know" writing style is not good. The story lacks of excitement cause the spoiler in the early chapters ruin it all, it was as if the MC is destined to stand at the peak no matter what tragedy befall the MC.

This is stupid...