This is my first work, so I don't expect it to be perfect or considered a gem. If you have any suggestions, you can comment it, and I will make sure to keep them in mind. Maybe edit the story a bit or implement something knew if I think it's a good idea. Thanks for the feedback.

Author here, this is my first time trying to write something. Please don't hesitate to say anything that doesn't make sense/is wrong. English is my second language but I am confident that there isn't too many grammatical mistakes. This story is mostly inspired by my own life (obv with a little fantasy). So, ENJOY!

If you're into watching a slut that just fucks anyone and everyone, this is the novel for you, just pure degenerate content. You might as well watch porn instead of this.

So far the concept is very well done, the story feels original and well thought out. I have nothing bad to say about it, if you're looking for a good read this is it.

There isn't enough time or words to see how the MC is feeling, it's all just too fast-paced. I would recommend to slow down a bit and focus on details.

So far the story is really enjoyable, but I feel like at the beginning it was too fast-paced. Everything felt a little rushed. But other than that it's a good read.

yo ur teath good?

I really like this story, I feel really immersed and the grammar, world building, and characters are all good and I can't really find anything to criticise about.

y no update :( ........................................................................................................

ok it's fine :( gl in the contest tho 👍

while the author does write emotions to characters I may have exaggerated when I said only emotion is gritting teeth but I still feel as if it's forced. but other than that this is a good novel.

This novel is good but like other novels by this author the immersion of the novel is just nonexistent, for me the way the author writes I feel no attachment to the story at all, because all the characters just feel like they're npcs including the mc. all there is for emotion is just "he/she gritted his/her teeth" or "said with a profound expression" which I don't even know wtf that means but whatever. so basically the story and the world background are very good but the characters and writing are monotone and it makes you feel nothing because I can't feel anything or relate to an mc who's only emotion is "grit his teeth" or any other side character. also I feel like I don't know the mc, I think there should've been more focus on the mc's background so I can know what type of person the mc is.

Love the story! But I actually can't understand the comments, people keep saying MC is so bad omg he is so weak garbage and trash and this novel is bad, when the MC is in pain or just been taken from his world and family. I dont really know what to say because the MC like this just seems more human and relatable to me, if you were to end up in a situation like this you would obv freak out and be heartbroken by the fact you can't see your friends and family and if your bones were breaking from doing this art you would cry and want to stop because the pain from breaking bones no human being can just ignore or "go through the pain" unless you have adrenaline and even then thats a stretch. all in all i really like this novel as the MC feels relatable and the pacing is nice and the writing and grammar is good. gj auther :)

It's fine to focus on your exams no need to feel pressured :)

Now it only works on the app not on the website so just go on the app and you can get the fast passes :)

I read all the chapters so far up to 39 and I have to say that i love this story and can't wait to see more! I had this story in my library for some time but i never got around to reading it but now that i read it. it's really good. But i do sometimes feel like some interactions get skipped like when Damien befriended katherine it just felt kind of odd to just read it as "Damien befriended katherine" instead of getting to see the both of them talking and the interactions between them. Hopefully that changes tho because seeing the MC interacting and befriending other characters makes it much more immersive and i guess feels more "real" Anyways other than that this novel was amazing imo

I mean breathing is pretty essential so... 🤷

Story is actually pretty good idk why you are hating on it so much because of one sentence and while the writing could be better but it's still good. idk why you are so mad

??? How is being nice called a "simp"? he has billions of dollars and now he's a simp because he helped someone? wtf is this review this novel is actually pretty good while i did find a couple of chapters boring im actually enjoying it. don't listen to random reviews and ignore the novel and try reading a couple of chapters first

bruh wdym there a literal man-eating fish in a lake thats next to a lot of people and fishermen what do u expect??? why do people on this website have no reasonable morale compass or just flat out hate humans for no reason. why not just kill the fish which is an animal. it doesn't have any intelligence or sense of self and could save actual human lives and families