Maryixxx
There are just a few bumps in the road in the grammar aspect, but still job well done. Although the chapters are short, it somehow makes you want to read more because you know.. "What's next?" Haha! I just do wish, in the first two chapters I got to already know a bit more of Hermione and Seb and about their school. It's your typical high school scenario, but I guess I have to read more to find out the twist. Honestly, it made me want to read more 'cause a part of me thinks that "I'm sure there's something more to this one than a cliche high school drama, right?" Hehe that being said, this story has a potential if you just give it a chance! Well done, Author!
I really, really enjoyed the first few chapters! The action in the beginning got me hooked, and you introduced your characters pretty well. I could tell who to start hating just in the first scene haha. But overall, it was wonderful! Amazing job author! There were only a few grammatical errors regarding punctuation and awkward tense shifts, but honestly well done! Keep going ^U^
I'm a sucker for romance of all kinds and the bad boy that protects the princess is my kind of story. I can't get enough of the "knight in shining armor" stories and My Boyfriend is a Campus Bad Boy takes me back to the days of that kind of romance. I'll update as I go on but so far I'm squealing like an idiot.