Awesome story! It's got me hooked and is very interesting. The writing style is great, and I love the way you write your characters! It's super immersive. Great job! Keep it up!
Great novel! I like the premise, and the opening was super interesting! I love the mysteries it introduced. The writing and grammar and flawless, nice job! Keep it up!
Great novel! I really enjoy the point of view of the protagonist. It really puts me in his shoes and makes me feel like I'm standing right there with him. Keep up the good work!
Great novel! It has really great writing quality, the english quality is really good too. The characters are very likeable and I really enjoy reading about them. Nice job!
Great novel! I really like the main character. Antihero/unethical protagonists are my personal favorite. The beginning is very intriguing and captivating, and the narration is really well done. Nice job!
Great novel! I love the narration, the main character feels really interesting and I like the way he thinks/acts. It's a very captivating read and I definitely suggest it!
I think "nerf" should be capitalized here (to "Nerf") since it's the name of a brand, right? Or, since "Nerf" is an acronym (Non-Expanding Recreational Foam) it could also be in all-caps? (to "NERF")
Thank you! I've tried editing the chapters and breaking up the paragraphs, and it seems to work when I view it on the computer website, but when I view it on the mobile app it doesn't seem like anything's changed. Once I get that figured out then those big ugly paragraphs should be split up much more nicely!
Haha, as a writer, I can definitely relate to this. But separate from that, it's a good novel on it's own merit. It's unique and obviously very accurate - the best person to understand how a writer thinks, is a writer themselves! Really interesting novel and I definitely recommend it
Great novel! I think that you can go a lot of places with the whole werewolves x mortals plot, and I'm excited to see which direction you take it! The character are likeable and it's a pretty fun read
it puts it there for you already, so it ends up saying "Chapter 1: Chapter 1: ..."
fyi you should probably change your chapter title here. you don't have to put "chapter 1" in the beginning
Great story! I really enjoyed reading the thoughts of the main character, and the comedy was really well done. The translation isn't perfect but that doesn't bother me and the author said it would be fixed soon anyway.
lots of screaming lol
Nice! The grammar could use some work, but that doesn't bother me. I enjoyed the novel and and it actually made me laugh out loud a couple times! Interesting plot hook and really neat mystery in the beginning!
lol nice pun
Really cool novel! I enjoyed reading about the magic system, and I personally really like first person perspective, so that was a big plus for me. It's very interesting and I'm interested to see where it will go in the future. Definitely has potential!
Really great novel. The beginning is captivating and has a whole lot of great mystery. Also, it's written in first person, which I personally love! It's very dark but it isn't "edgy" or whatever. Everyone feels like real people and not just random characters meant to serve a purpose. Also, the grammar/prose is great! Definitely recommend.