Sure is!

I'm glad you enjoyed it! 😊

Thanks!

Yeah, it is a bit tricky to understand. But think of it as 'just a way's from here,' or 'it's over yonder.' It doesn't really give a specific distance or time relative to the location. :)

Depending on where a person's head is cut, their severed throat may tighten causing the victim (if they haven't died from shock) to produce a choked spasm from any blood, mucus, or other fluids stuck in the lungs or throat. :D

I like the narrative, very interesting conversations, and lots of unique dialogue. I laughed at the scene in Ch. 17 when he said he couldn't understand women, and oh boy, sometimes I do not. 🤣 Nice job, keep writing!

Nice start with an interesting premise. I like how the story gave a few small indents from the author themselves, truly made me enjoy the story even more. Keep it up!

The dialogue has a decent flow and the use of hyphens instead of quotations marks was an interesting way to read, the first I've seen. World-building and character design can use some work, I couldn't visualize any settings nor conversations being had in the first few lines which are crucial to captivating a reader. Despite the needed touching-up, it's a decent read.

The story had a decent flow, and the dialogue was believable. POV made all of the situations Anastasia gets into. A few of your first chapters have some grammatical errors and typos, but those can be easily fixed in the proofreading process. Another point, using identifiers like 'said' and 'asked' can get a bit bland and repetitive; I suggest pairing a character's voice with a specific action, how they look, tone, etc. Keep writing, all the best.

Hello friends! I've decided to write a small review since WN doesn't allow non-exclusive books to be linked to any accounts! The story follows Miya Yuna, a recently deployed Space Patroller of the Ya'valt Galactic Federation after being manipulated by her superior with her only other choice being death. If I had to give this book three genres it would be... Psychological Horror, Space, and Action. This story is also rated M for Mature Audiences Only, as it has gore, sexual content, traumatizing material, and strong language. The book itself has tons of nifty subjects such as Artificial Intelligence, Dystopias, Futuristic Settings, and Outer Space. While elements of Hard Sci-Fi are entertained in the book, answering questions such as how planets operate, certain scientific elements, etc., it has some details that also make it very interesting yet educational to follow. So those that are actually interested in learning more can enjoy reading alongside those who want to continue moving along with the story. With all of that being said, if you want a story that's harboring monstrous yet unusual extraterrestrials, cosmic wars, gunfights, and cruel characters — All being combated by a ruthless female protagonist in the shape of a young half-bred girl, please continue! If you want to talk about the book, please don't hesitate to join the Discord link in the description. Want extra chapters, merch, and physical copies once the first volume completes? Check out my Patreon, @WinterTimeCrime! See you on the next page!

More jokes are presented at the start of the novel, however, it's less presented as the story progresses. 👍

Idk why but the site scrolled down and this was the first paragraph I saw LOL.

Sorta, but romance isn't the focus here.

Hi, yeah, sorry. He actually survived, being revealed in a side story... But I forgot to post the chapter and it was to far gone for it to make any sense. 😓 There's no other screw ups like this I assure you. Hope you're enjoying the book! 😍🤩

It's a bit hard to explain without spoiling. 😅 Saori is in possession of a Pact Scroll (as previewed in Ch. 43) that're tools that enable the user to perform spells without magic (as explained in Ch. 52). With her new found power, one of the side effects is that she's slowly losing the ability to speak (in fact you can see that she can't talk at all now). They'll go over Pacts more in the next few chapters and the Revelations Arc so don't worry if you're still confused. 😉 Hope this helps! 🙏 👌 😌

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You're very welcome! 😄 and thank you for the gift!