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Great start so far! I was really drawn by your writing style! I thought it was smooth and easy to read. The story is so mysterious, too, and I can't wait to see where it will go. Hopefully they'll be some cool twists hehe. But amazing work overall author! I hope you keep continuing this book in the future! I definitely recommend it to anyone wanting a great read at 3am hahaha >_<
I have to say, you're synopsis did a great job reeling me into your story. It's concise enough to tell me what the novel is about without making it a hassle to read everything which is amazing! For the story itself, I'm enjoying it so much! I'm intrigued by Roxana's character, and I also enjoy how well you let the scenes flow after one another. The writing is smooth, easy to read, and nearly perfect. I cannot wait to see where this book goes >_<
I really, really enjoyed this story so far! It's so mysterious and intriguing that I couldn't put it down. I love the way you set up your scenes because it creates a nice flow and progression, one that's not too fast or too slow. The characters are also well developed so far, and I love it! Also your writing is far better than most on this site. It was like I was reading a hardcover book! Awesome job author!!!
I LOVE your ominous and mysterious writing style! Something about the narration just puts me on guard as a reader, trying to distinguish why the scenes are so mysterious, which really fits well with the tone of the story! In other words, your writing style really glued my eyes to the page! I would suggest shortening some sentences, because some tend to become a run on sentence or they just get wordy. Long, wordy sentences distracts the reader, so I suggest tweaking those a bit. The plot and characters have been amazing so far as well! I'm really hooked by it. Other than some issues with sentences and grammar, I really enjoyed the book so far, that's why I gave writing quality a 5/5! Again, amazing work author! Can't wait to see where this book goes ^U^
Ahh amazing!!! I don't usually read too much action stories such as this, but because of you, I'm going to start reading! And yours is going to be on the topic of my list hehe. It's awesome! You drew me in with your world building and action. I also loved how it's fast paced and exciting in every chapter and the writing is FLAWLESS. I recommend this to anyone wanting to read a fast-paced, full of action novel. Awesome job author!!!