Reviews of 24856687405018005

first time reviewing, and an honest review. I have been here since the time the author started to write this novel, and I don't get any problems with the update. And the story looks the same as other stories, but it is different in its own way. And how the author writes characters and builds the world is great. The story progresses very smoothly and is great. If I have any problem, it's that I get confused over some words or sentences that I can't imagine.

Great novel😍 The best thing about this is the story. Even though I have read a lot of stories with the same plot, there is something thing different about this. And the writing is understandable for even the beginners, since I am a beginner, it's one of the best. If you add some twists with some revealing, it will be one of the amazing stories. #loving it🥰

Since SAO, Log horizon and co. I love all things VR. The grammer and formating is also very clean. The pacing seems to be also good, the only thing I do not quite understand is the title. I means normaly I would be something like: "I became the most op to marry a npc" or something like that. Maybe it's because I am not a native english speaker, but I do not even know what bundt means :( I just feel like if this came out from a big author, with a nice cover art and a catchy title, it would be a hit ;)

This book was recommended to me on discord so I knew absolutely nothing going into it other than it was a game world and I didn't even read the summary so I wouldn't have expectations. I really loved the hook into the story, it was witty and sets the tone for the character. You learn a lot about the world within the first 2 chapters, but it's not an info dump at all, it flows well and you can get a clear vision. The main character is relatable, really relatable - it follows a first-person perspective which I rarely read, but I didn't get pulled out of the story at all which is a testament to the author's writing. I also love that they write such detailed game descriptions - for example when the main character creates the in-game character. The pacing is believable and smooth. Overall it's a really good read - I'll be adding it to my library and I can't wait to read more as it updates further.

Great introduction, hooked me right in. Interesting premise. Anticipating the new chapters.

It's a very good novel. And it's also very realistic,just from reading first chapter i can imagine our world becoming like this. Though VRMMORPG better comes fast.

A easy novel too get into, very easy to understand the plot and direction of the narrative. So if this genre is your cup of tea then by all means red it. there are a few unique spins that prevent it from being cookie cutter but nothing genre breaking. Only read up to 5 chapters before this review so there probably so much more as the story continues. May even be a hidden gem type of book

The story is good. The author has a unique way of describing the events. The interactions between characters are also good. The characters are unique. Overall, the writing quality is good, and the world building is very detailed.

Honest review here. Let's start of with the writing, the world building is great, I like how detailed it is but at the same time I think you could shorten some unnecessary details so the writing doesn't feel draggy. No major grammer issues and the pace is going well. Could have worked on the foreshadowing part to keep the readers hooked, otherwise great work. 👍

Nice story introduction, it realy got me hooked, and the written quality is great. I like the way the story is heading, can't wait for the next update.

I love the introduction and your manner of writing. This is actually my first time reading a game novel and it's quite interesting. I love the story line. Just started reading the book and I'm already loving it.