Sorry.

Thanks.

I will. She has a reason for saying that.

Please read the notice chapter on the auxiliary part.

Made the changes now. You can check it if you want.

I will slightly alter Isolde's words in a way that will make Lucavion look like someone from her side and not a victim. I will update the previous chapter soon, as after rereading it, I seem to have failed in that part.

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No, he won't. This MC will be different. He will not be apathetic, but he will have his fair share of traumas, and you will witness them here in the process.

We do.

This time, I will tone it a lot more. Rather than making it out of jealousy, I will keep it as a rivalry.

They do.

I don't understand. How did he just become a pebble with just one event? The potential he holds as a character is still insanely high and this is just a development he had to make his character realistic. You should write these types of comments after seeing the execution of his part of story, not seeing just the start of it.

Aside from Ds3 Elden Ring is way above any other Soulsborne game.

I replied every to other comment and this one 'After' that day. I am neither tired right now nor was tired when I was replying to other comments. Also, none of those replies were that longer than my initial response, just like this one.

It is on the description of the book.

It's a clear and good review; thanks for writing it. To address the writing style, this is mainly how I write the fights, but according to the feedback from the readers, I can adapt to different styles of writing. As for the criticism regarding the plot, you are absolutely correct. The plot revolves so much around the emotional aspect and interactions of the main characters right now. I am trying to display how a person can change from a cold-blooded revenge pursuer to a healed human. But, by doing that, the story overwhelmingly became something that is hard to be called as a revenge plot, and I am aware of this. Though it is not purely unlogical, and these types of things can easily be covered, from a reader's perspective, it most likely makes the MC weirdly lost. I will try to improve on this aspect to make the plot 'advance' rather than stagnate.

I mean, it's a story inspired by Aphelios, at least. However, I am also a Sherlock Holmes fan, so it became something mixed with Sherlock Holmes, Aphelios, and a classic academy setting.

That is an understandable point. From what I see, you dislike 'guns,' which is completely fine. Callius is a magic/sword user, and Astron is different. But well, just to be clear, the reason why this novel was written is not related to Novel's Extra; it has already been at least 3-4 years since I read it. The reason is solely because I love Aphelios' story and wanted to write a story regarding him. That is it.

That will be addressed.