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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Replied to CaptainBoyHole

    he will be using a lot of weapons, not just sword.

    They had taught him how to block and attack with the sword. Tyler was also using them as training dummies... No, neither training dummy, he was just paying homage to his masters.
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Commented

    Book is paused due to improvements i am trying to make. It will be paused for at most like 1 and half a month. Everything about book will be improved immensely. I apologize for pausing the book. See u later.

    Ch 9 Pressure
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Replied to 8358038

    i tried to make it as real as possible sorry :(

    Ch 7 Taking on the boss solo
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Commented

    please new chapter

    Ch 22 The Commander
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
    Fantasy · QueenFrieza
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Commented

    she wore*

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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Commented

    hmm, it's better to say, given his strength beyond his skinny body. But that's okay.

    As they finished for the day, the knights were pleasantly surprised at how well Henry did with the armor. There was no doubt working his life away had given him strength beyond the muscles on his body - or lack thereof.
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
    Fantasy · QueenFrieza
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Commented

    One quick tip: eating 2 hours ago before your workout is better.

    Henry had been told before to slow down while he was eating so he wouldn't get an ache in his side when he had to do more cardiovascular exercises. He had to focus hard in order not to rush—the speed of eating certainly came from having faced starvation many times before.
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
    Fantasy · QueenFrieza
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Commented

    newbie gains always are fast brother. Keep up this gym bro is supporting you with all of his heart!

    As Henry dressed, he pulled the off-white tunic over his head and tied up the laced part of his shirt. As he looked down at his body, he could have sworn there was more muscle definition, but he didn't want to believe it and fall for wishful thinking.
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
    Fantasy · QueenFrieza
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Replied to OnlySupremeOne

    Oh, do not skip leg day. It's good for testosterone when you work out your legs.

    As he drifted off, he worried that he would never be able to impress a woman like that with his scrawny body and awkward personality.
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
    Fantasy · QueenFrieza
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Commented

    Do not worry king, you shall get bulked up and impress the girls with your muscles.

    As he drifted off, he worried that he would never be able to impress a woman like that with his scrawny body and awkward personality.
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
    Fantasy · QueenFrieza
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Commented

    I thought he would eat the half meal and give the rest of the meal to his mom

    He finished the entire meal in under two minutes.
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    I Want To Be A Romance Novel's Love Interest
    Fantasy · QueenFrieza
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Posted

    I am so jealous of your writing skills. You describe details very good,i am envious... Story development is hmm how should i say? it could be slower? It felt like went a little bit fast at first chapter. But your overall quality is good. Though your stability of updates is a mess it could be better to fix that brother!

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    The Last Werewolf (Silver Blood)
    Fantasy · Jenival_Enyia
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Replied to Moonlight_senora

    Thanks sister! This king has grammar mistakes,so can not say i do not have a error! However this king is going to improve himself and edit all of my existing chapters into better ones.

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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Replied to QueenFrieza

    Thanks for this honest review sister! This king is going to focus on improving the grammar and trying to break these paragraphs into shorter ones. I will edit my existing chapters once i am sure i improved my grammar enough. Thanks again!

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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Posted

    The only reason why i didn't give a complete 5 star is because there has been no chapter since 3 months... It's enough of a reason to make the whole world cry in despair. I can't describe how good is writing quality. It's just on a whole another level. I can say it's better than most of the top authors. From character design,to story development to world background everything is great. What is lacking is chapters. Please give us chapters author! You learn new things everytime you read these small but 2 chapters. It's an incredible feeling. I think everyone should give it a try.

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    White Box [One Shot]
    Horror · Victan_Vermillion
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Posted

    Except for your writing quality which is not bad but not good either,your story is okay. It's better to check your chapter before publishing them and reading it from reader's perspective. Keep up!

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    The Divine God-(Slice of LIfe)
    Eastern · The_Idiotic_Prince
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Posted

    The novel is very good. Writing quality is one of the best. Stability of updates is excellent there are chapter everyday. Story is developing nicely and slowly which is my preference. Character design and world background is good too. This is one of the best books among recently published books. Thank you king for releasing this book!

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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Replied to Galanar

    I thank you senior for this honest review. Yes World background and story development is too lacking. I will try to improve them to my best of ability. I will also try to improve my writing quality too. Thank you again senior!

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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Posted

    This novel is very good brother. You describe very good with various words. Your way of using punctuations are a little bad. But they could be improved through grammarly check. Your story kept me entertained so far. Keep up!

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    The Cosplay
    History · emaan_Hussain_2035
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  • OnlySupremeOne
    OnlySupremeOne1yr
    Posted

    Writing quality is good however that could be improved further with grammarly check. Your stability of updates are not good right now,they should be improved. You should write one chapter daily at the very least. Other than that your novel is very good. I like it.

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    THE HUMAN'S BLOODY LOVER
    Fantasy · Moonlight_senora
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