Good to meet a fellow Critter. It may take a while for our mc to get there, but stay tuned.

Yes, most spells also need hand gestures and a focus. The silencing spell is therefore very strong.

Just because its the biggest city in the world. Later in the series earth is only his home base and he will travel most of the time.

Thanks for the review, first of all! To be fair to the other reviewers, I just went back and corrected the grammar in the first chapter ;)

My man, you have many wonderful ideas in this book and all your other ones. You also are a very persistent person who can devote more time to a story. However, I strongly advise you to take a seat and attempt to approach the entire webnovel project more similarly to writing a "normal" book. Do not misunderstand me; the majority of the books on this site are simply trashy power fantasy. Even though you've written so many novels, it's clear that you hope to write even better works in the future. Now that that is out of the way, I advise using quillbot, grammerly, or another grammar checker. Your sentence structure is disorganized, but your spelling is generally fine. The pacing is really off—you jump from scene to scene, don't let the action settle, and don't even let your characters have a few more minutes to talk. My opinion is exactly that—my opinion. Please go ahead as you are comfortable. I just wanted to give you a few pointers as someone who has read hundreds of webnovels as well as "regular" books like The Lord of the Rings or Brandon Sanderson. I wish you success as you pursue your writing.

The now-classic combination of VR and RL is tried and tested. I especially like the yakuza elements. The only thing I do not like that much is the mc himself, but that is just my personal preference. I prefer MCs who are more sympathetic, or at least have a background I can relate to. Maybe as time goes on, we'll learn more about the MC, which will make me like him more. If you keep up the daily uploads, I think this can really be something great.

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To begin with, this is really impressive for your debut work! The grammar, structure, and tension are all of a very high caliber. I typically don't read mysteries or crime novels, so I can't comment on how the plot develops. Just keep going, and you might convert me to a mystery fan ;)

haste not hasty

small error in the date ;)

Since SAO, Log horizon and co. I love all things VR. The grammer and formating is also very clean. The pacing seems to be also good, the only thing I do not quite understand is the title. I means normaly I would be something like: "I became the most op to marry a npc" or something like that. Maybe it's because I am not a native english speaker, but I do not even know what bundt means :( I just feel like if this came out from a big author, with a nice cover art and a catchy title, it would be a hit ;)

forgot the y in the my

I really like these kind's of novels, they remind of the big korean ones, like Solo Leveling or the hole Tower Ascension Genre. The author is new, so I am very excited to see where this story goes. persistence is everything, I do not mind small mistakes as long as the author keeps up with the good work.

I can already hear truck-kun roaring his engine XD

Here you go: A world worth protecting (same author as a will eternal) the legendary Mechanic