Honest review here. Let's start of with the writing, the world building is great, I like how detailed it is but at the same time I think you could shorten some unnecessary details so the writing doesn't feel draggy. No major grammer issues and the pace is going well. Could have worked on the foreshadowing part to keep the readers hooked, otherwise great work. 👍
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