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Since SAO, Log horizon and co. I love all things VR. The grammer and formating is also very clean. The pacing seems to be also good, the only thing I do not quite understand is the title. I means normaly I would be something like: "I became the most op to marry a npc" or something like that. Maybe it's because I am not a native english speaker, but I do not even know what bundt means :( I just feel like if this came out from a big author, with a nice cover art and a catchy title, it would be a hit ;)