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WanderingPhoenix
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This book was recommended to me on discord so I knew absolutely nothing going into it other than it was a game world and I didn't even read the summary so I wouldn't have expectations. I really loved the hook into the story, it was witty and sets the tone for the character. You learn a lot about the world within the first 2 chapters, but it's not an info dump at all, it flows well and you can get a clear vision. The main character is relatable, really relatable - it follows a first-person perspective which I rarely read, but I didn't get pulled out of the story at all which is a testament to the author's writing. I also love that they write such detailed game descriptions - for example when the main character creates the in-game character. The pacing is believable and smooth. Overall it's a really good read - I'll be adding it to my library and I can't wait to read more as it updates further.

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VertiKalEl
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Glad I was able to give u a good experience of first person. I mainly write this way and I am trying to improve as much as possible. glad my efforts are paying off.