Reviews of Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman
Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman
xlntz
- Overall Rate
- Writing Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
The story is interesting and has the potential to be even better. from the very first chapter you get the feeling that the author is expecting you to know what's plotting in is mind... I mean there's little to no development on things that matter like the mc working is way into the academy. There are time skips everywhere to the point where you don't know what matters and what's just there as extra like there little to no description on the mc's family to the point where he might as well be an orphan. The author places his focus things that don't matter ( at least that's the feeling I get from reading the story) and you always get the feeling that a lot is missing at the end of each chapter. The story has a lot of potential by it is wasted by not having enough character development.
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The story is currently developing, obviously it suprises me on how it presents its story flow. Its slow but overall exciting. There are times you will notice that you can't imagine the emotion and expressions of the characters maybe the author should some of its character development in the emotuon area. Its only my opinion the story is good, new, and exciting. Hope for new chapters ahead.
The first chapter was a roller coaster of emotions, I have to hand it to you if you planned the final moment to be comedic in tone because I straight up laughed out loud! Though I feel that the premise had changed from what it was originally since the other 'him' would be the focus from now on, I can see the potential in it. Hope you continue your work author! Don't be like the first Wallace, he ain't so lucky!
This is my first novel of this genre. And I must say the plot is quite interesting. The thing I like most about this novel is author's constructive approach. I really liked the author's writing style. The concept is very good. It is very different from the romance novels I usually read. But it is a good experience. But I must say I found the first chapter complicated. It would be better if we could get a clear understanding of the world background. But after that the flow of the story is quite good. Keep up the good work author.
A very well written story. When I read the synopsis, I was like, "Eh? Why'd he died tho?", it evoked that curiosity to know the reason behind it and the aftermath after it. Then I began to read the novel. And every time I finished 1 chapter I kept saying, "I'll do the review once I read this chapter" then sometime later it'll turn to "Just one more chapter, then I'll make the review haha" I also like how the author portrayed the flow of the sorry.
Needs editor for grammar and clarity. The Author seems inexperienced because of inclusion info dumps, unclear logic and other minor writing snafus. However the author seems to have a lot of passion for developing an interesting world that exists independent from the op mc and the premise of the story is both interesting and promising.
A story starting from 'RED ALERT' caught my attention and the opening lines can garner everyone's attention. A well written story with excellent grammatical use to make it a plus point. Quoting the title one can say 'trust a pathfinder (probably a person showing path with a light in hand) but it's DEFINITELY WRONG. This isn't the thing, the title has a different meaning, which is good enough to create a mystery in initial chapters. Secondly it seems two parallel worlds are going on but Wallace is a single person having memories of both Wallace and tends to adopt his new life. Everything author has created shows his/her hard work, the world building is strong which is a plu point of this plotline. With exceptional usage of vocabulary, it has a few(****y-tiny) errors here and there BUT like two in then chapters. Give it a go and it will not disappoint you,if you're into technology and parallel worlds.
it's a good sci-fi novel, but seems this novel was on hiatus for more than 1 time. the reader in the comments section was dropped tremendously after the 300th something chapter. the ending was also a bit forced, maybe after the first hiatus, the author was hiatus once again before trying to make this novel completed. the story was resembles some novels at first. the plot was in the Academy of magic and then going to space to fight aliens. the world was combination of science and fantasy. its good today for I could read these 483 chapters on single day because of limited free.
This book is great because it integrate the science and magic. The story is also interesting because it is not the normal fantasy in which the main character died and reincarnated in the fantasy world and that fantasy world is in the medieval era and kill the demon lord which is now too boring because that plot is now too common however this story is good because it do not follow that kind of plot.
The writing style of the author is new and can be seen as it draws elements from other sources. However, it is still original and was kinda interesting in the way it is released. I don't like the implied cut back story as it cuts off trains of thought quite often without structure. Still understandable and concise as they seem to be avoiding filler. Mixed opinions on that. Hope this doesn't turn into a 1k+ series. Would ruin the pacing of the story and draw the it out to much.
