Aysel_Inara
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A well crafted crime romance amalgamation. I'm still in awe the way every scene is so easy to visualise whole scene of the room test. Moving on to the fist fight of chief and Jack, the leaps and punches were effortlessly playing in my head. The disguise of other folks, the tension in atmosphere, the whole scenario of Sarah- Jack meet up is amazing! Just waiting when he will actually step inside the house, after tackling all the goons and assassins.
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There are just lots of flashbacks indicated to explain such things
"But if you follow my orders then you may survive later, If not then you will have a future, more terrible comparatively death because Ronan Ross would never forgive you at any cost. Only your life would satiate his revenge for kissing his wife." - Aysel_Inara2yrReplied to NotBeatrix
Yup yup, you're right
Chapter 1 - Aysel_Inara2yrCommentedCh 1 Chapter: 2
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Better give catchy titles to the chapters.
Chapter 1 - Aysel_Inara2yrReplied to Night_Crawler619
The professor from earlier chapters
'The chaos element for humans,' Lieutenant Dyester thought while resuming his position on the table. 'He needs an excellent martial art to compensate for this weakness. I wonder if the higher-ups still remember their debt.' - Aysel_Inara2yrCommentedCh 6 Bounded
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Yikes! So it's like he has lived a loop of same stuff?
Everything was, action for action, the same as his dream, mere hours before that baneful monstrosity's attack claimed their lives. On the other hand, though, he had enjoyed similar activities daily in the last two years, so it was hard to be sure which was true and which was false. - Aysel_Inara2yrCommented
I'd have been scared as shiz!
Surprised, Viktor turned around on instinct to see who said it, only to discover that there was no one else with him. - Aysel_Inara2yrCommented
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"Blyat!!" A loud curse resounded through the air, startling those nearby. - Aysel_Inara2yrCommented
Oh my! π³
"Devil? How could it be? How could a devil reside inside a human body?" The Great Emperor's eyes were wide open as he spoke. - Aysel_Inara2yrReplied to yasaa
Current version is edited, personally by me.
Anger - Aysel_Inara2yrCommented
To long again, even longer sentences. It looks hella weird on phone even though i'm currently o pc but the outlook is unpleasant.
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Too long paragraph, which can be split into 3
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Good, Good!
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