The first chapter was a roller coaster of emotions, I have to hand it to you if you planned the final moment to be comedic in tone because I straight up laughed out loud! Though I feel that the premise had changed from what it was originally since the other 'him' would be the focus from now on, I can see the potential in it. Hope you continue your work author! Don't be like the first Wallace, he ain't so lucky!
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