The story is currently developing, obviously it suprises me on how it presents its story flow. Its slow but overall exciting. There are times you will notice that you can't imagine the emotion and expressions of the characters maybe the author should some of its character development in the emotuon area. Its only my opinion the story is good, new, and exciting. Hope for new chapters ahead.
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