Review Detail of Jacques_TSHILEMB in Magical Academy: Rise of the Supreme Magic Craftsman

The story is interesting and has the potential to be even better. from the very first chapter you get the feeling that the author is expecting you to know what's plotting in is mind... I mean there's little to no development on things that matter like the mc working is way into the academy. There are time skips everywhere to the point where you don't know what matters and what's just there as extra like there little to no description on the mc's family to the point where he might as well be an orphan. The author places his focus things that don't matter ( at least that's the feeling I get from reading the story) and you always get the feeling that a lot is missing at the end of each chapter. The story has a lot of potential by it is wasted by not having enough character development.