Reviews of I transmigrated as the Female Leader, but I want to marry the villain!

Hello, here is the author: Title: I reincarnated as the female leader, but I want to marry the villain. Number of chapters per week: 5 + 2 extras. Number of Chapters for the novel: 100 (I always establish this goal, you can pass.) Genre: Xianxia, Female Main Character, Strong Female Character, Action, Comedy, Adventure, Cold and Distant Male Leader, and Romance. NOTE: There will be mature content and R18, but will be warned in each chapter. I hope you enjoy, as I always love to write a new world, forgive me the grammatical errors and even the mistakes regarding the Xianxia world, I accept criticism and suggestions, if they will come that I messed up or changed the information regarding the Xianxia world can comment or send message, I promise to correct. Kisses

Author when are you coming back?? Honestly i wish you'd update at least once a month is okay......author we miss you plz do come back and i love the characters and the story development. Hope to hear from you soon dear Author😄😄

Just reading this synopsis made it thrilling and exciting. What more if I read the first chapter? Hihihi, i have high expectations Author.. Pls update daily... Make it more entertaining.. 😄😄👯👯

OK I dropped this after chapter 50. I should dropped this earlier. Lot of unnecessary information, messy timeline, and plot. The author few times mixed up "she" and "he", which made me question few things. "Now XY character have a husband or a wife?? " I was skipping chapters because of the lot of unnecessary information while the characters didn't do anything and the story was not moving at all. The author jumping between past and present, confusing sometimes the readers. No hate, but this story just not my cup of tea although I read lot of transmigration and reincarnation novels, this is just a no for me.

The story and characters are great! BUT the grammar is a big OOF!! You need to get an editor or hire a new one because there are a ton of errors that ruin the flow of the story. Work hard and don't give up!

I like reading this... the only problem I have is the spelling errors and the wrong pronouns used to describe the genders at times, he became she and etc. But I like where this story is going! Please update soon! 😁😁😁

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Well...I don't know what to say other than this story is a grammatical nightmare. It's just...sigh. The premise is beautiful and I guess you can ignore the errors if you like it enough but...well. You really should work on your pronouns in particular. Just to clarify, for a woman is used /she/ and for a male /he/. Always. No exchange between the two can occour. Not only that, you also fill the chapters with unneeded info, throwing up facts left and right, making it a boring read. Is the reason why I only gave you 3 stars for world background. It's not that you did not develop it, it's just that...you didn't really fit it very well in the story. You should try to integrate your info more with the flow of the story, revealing smaller bits in more points. There is no need to dump everything on the readers at once, it only stops the flow and few people will read those added parts anyway (like i did) which is a pity. Aside from those points it's a beautiful story, I liked it. You probably should just think more about editing your chapters rather than postin them quicker, really. Anyway, I hope I didn't offend you with my comments and that instead they could be of some help to improve your writing style.

A very good read, this has a very good and well thought world background and plot. Even though there are some grammatical mistakes author seems to be improving. Currently loving this work hope it continues stably. Thanks for the author for your hard work. 😁👍

Love this story so far! I started the book and binge-read up to the currently last chapter 25, 'cause I always wanted to know what happens next. It's a story that absolutely captures you with a lot of surprising twist in the plot. Sometimes I'm worried that our MC gets silly, but luckily she's still capable.

Overall, love the idea but room for improvement. Great story, quirky charakters and a light, fun reading. Grammer errors here and there but it doesn't affect the understanding. Some chapters feel like going too fast...how to say, tmi, it just feels as if you get a bunch of things tossed at you, when it could have been paced slower, with more love for smaller details in it to feel the atmosphere without having to focus on a bunch of other equally important and interesting happenings. ATM at chapter 21

Having fun reading this. A few mistakes in grammar and quite a few situations where he/she have been switched by mistake. A bit too much info dump in every other chapter though. Exposing this much information needs to be done more sparingly. Love the characters but that system is making my head hurt. Story progression is hurting a bit from the constant irrational sidekick.

it was an okay story till chapter 11 when i got to chapter 11 i couldn't even tell what the **** was going on anymore and thats pretty bad for a novel

Very good! It's an interesting story. I like heroin, I like the male characters even more! I'm still waiting for FL to interact more with the villain and the Demon Lord!

The story is good so far. Interesting plot. Only the grammar is abit confusing. Just abit but i still can understand it. I can’t comment to much im just a reader n i just read 2 chapter.. keep up the good work. Btw im a dude n kind of enjoy this kind of story. Just the original... is it really there? I mean... existed?

Very disappointed. Got past the info dump only to find further disappointment. Writing style is all over the place leading to confusion. The only reason this isn’t high on the list of “oh hell no” is bc the story didn’t manage to hold my attention long enough for it to really sink in. Good idea but execution was terrible.

Amazing story. Love the tranmigration female lead theme. Especially main character fluffy romance. But why must they gain their memory it givesbaeayvall the mystery oh well love the different pov anyway.

The story has improved every time, although there are still errors in grammar, at least it has improved a bit. Thank you editors! 🙇🙇🙇 It has chapters with a lot of information, I think the author is in a hurry, although the last chapters have returned to normal. Being slower and softer, like at first! I'm going to change my assessment now that it already has more chapters. 😎😋 Love It! 😍😍😍

Incluso después de haber leído está historia hasta hace ya más de un año no puedo imaginarme el como el autor hubiera desarrollado la historia teniendo a tantos personajes principales.

Por favor no dejen caer está novela, más capitulos completos por favor ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................