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MellowFellow
MellowFellowLv145yrMellowFellow

The story is good so far. Interesting plot. Only the grammar is abit confusing. Just abit but i still can understand it. I can’t comment to much im just a reader n i just read 2 chapter.. keep up the good work. Btw im a dude n kind of enjoy this kind of story. Just the original... is it really there? I mean... existed?

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I transmigrated as the Female Leader, but I want to marry the villain!

Take_the_Moon

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Take_the_Moon
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Hi FishyFellow, thank you for writing a review on the story.! Well it's Original Story, but the cover does not belong to me, it's from an artist who was designing Asian girls, I do not know if anyone is using it in another story. As long as I am not hired by Qidian and are not profiting from it, the image can be used. If you are talking about the content of the story, it is original. Because I am cropping levels? Well I'm using the universal levels of cultivation. Although I'm making some variations, with each level. In short yes it is original, at least I did not see a story being written like mine. I'm sorry for the confusion with the spelling and the grammar, I try to correct the most I can, but mistakes that pass and I do not realize, since I wrote, so automatically my mind fills those spaces and I kept reading without seeing this error. I need an editor! T.T Xoxo

MellowFellow
MellowFellowLv14MellowFellow

Hi there! Im happy to know that you still continue this! Truly! And also i like the change that you brought since last time. I think its a good way to produce more ideas, u know. It just unexpectedly, there’s more than just young girls trying to changes her destiny but a world and universe to explore. And i was thinking if there’s other planet, there might’ve also be invasion, wars, conspiracy, political strife and so many others than just fighting and cultivation. And lastly, I don’t know any good editors around, but i think you did good so far. Just only need to improve the grammar thats all. Keep it up Author! Love the stories and the development. TRUE IMMORTAL XOXO!!

Take_the_Moon:Hi FishyFellow, thank you for writing a review on the story.! Well it's Original Story, but the cover does not belong to me, it's from an artist who was designing Asian girls, I do not know if anyone is using it in another story. As long as I am not hired by Qidian and are not profiting from it, the image can be used. If you are talking about the content of the story, it is original. Because I am cropping levels? Well I'm using the universal levels of cultivation. Although I'm making some variations, with each level. In short yes it is original, at least I did not see a story being written like mine. I'm sorry for the confusion with the spelling and the grammar, I try to correct the most I can, but mistakes that pass and I do not realize, since I wrote, so automatically my mind fills those spaces and I kept reading without seeing this error. I need an editor! T.T Xoxo