Very disappointed. Got past the info dump only to find further disappointment. Writing style is all over the place leading to confusion. The only reason this isn’t high on the list of “oh hell no” is bc the story didn’t manage to hold my attention long enough for it to really sink in. Good idea but execution was terrible.
Take_the_Moon
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LIKENo problem. Sorry, I didn’t realize the novel was dropped. My review is only for the work that was available to the public at time of review. Thanks.
Take_the_Moon:Okay. Why do you think the novel is stopped? I think I should just delete it and stop it. Thanks for your review.