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Overall, love the idea but room for improvement. Great story, quirky charakters and a light, fun reading. Grammer errors here and there but it doesn't affect the understanding. Some chapters feel like going too fast...how to say, tmi, it just feels as if you get a bunch of things tossed at you, when it could have been paced slower, with more love for smaller details in it to feel the atmosphere without having to focus on a bunch of other equally important and interesting happenings. ATM at chapter 21

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I transmigrated as the Female Leader, but I want to marry the villain!

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Thanks for the review!