Review Detail of Erotas in I transmigrated as the Female Leader, but I want to marry the villain!

Item: I transmigrated as the Female Leader, but I want to marry the villain!
Rating: 4

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ErotasLv55yrErotas

The story and characters are great! BUT the grammar is a big OOF!! You need to get an editor or hire a new one because there are a ton of errors that ruin the flow of the story. Work hard and don't give up!

I transmigrated as the Female Leader, but I want to marry the villain!

Take_the_Moon

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RatSlayerLv3RatSlayer

Just caught up! Sometimes the plot is all over the place and I get confused but it is still enjoyable. Improving on the grammar but gender pronouns get mixed up. He/His/Him = Male She/Her= Female

5yr

Take_the_MoonAuthorTake_the_Moon

Thanks for the review! \o/

5yr