it was an okay story till chapter 11 when i got to chapter 11 i couldn't even tell what the **** was going on anymore and thats pretty bad for a novel
Take_the_Moon
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LIKEHello reader! Thanks for the comments, but....................... Have you read the notes than I leave at the beginning of each chapter? Probably not, you are not the first or second who puts such a comment. At the beginning of the chapter I explain the changes and if the chapter is special or not, I also ask if the chapter will have or not R18, I often make a brief summary of what the chapter will contain, since you may have a reader who prefers to jump and follow usually the story. The qidian text editor is bad, or better, no has text editor, so it's difficult to mark the passage of time and change of character without going into a long description, not to mention that it is idiotic if I write: Now let's go back in time and see the past of character Y or we will see the perspective of character N in the middle of the narrative, I tried it when Sheng Shuyi had a dream, but a lot of people did not understand what the paragraph was about the twenty-first century, so I'd rather do separate chapters. When it is much better I write a chapter apart with the analysis of the character n without conflicting with the main narration. So I notice at the beginning of each chapter whether the chapter is going to be special or not. But now I was saddened by this review because you clearly did not read the opening notes of the chapters and gave me an evaluation anyway. I hope you have understood what I meant, but next time send the comment, then I'll explain. Still, thanks for reading the story and for commenting. Xoxo
i still like the story i have it bookmarked but im saying i got real confused through chapter 11-15 everything else was good
Take_the_Moon:Hello reader! Thanks for the comments, but....................... Have you read the notes than I leave at the beginning of each chapter? Probably not, you are not the first or second who puts such a comment. At the beginning of the chapter I explain the changes and if the chapter is special or not, I also ask if the chapter will have or not R18, I often make a brief summary of what the chapter will contain, since you may have a reader who prefers to jump and follow usually the story. The qidian text editor is bad, or better, no has text editor, so it's difficult to mark the passage of time and change of character without going into a long description, not to mention that it is idiotic if I write: Now let's go back in time and see the past of character Y or we will see the perspective of character N in the middle of the narrative, I tried it when Sheng Shuyi had a dream, but a lot of people did not understand what the paragraph was about the twenty-first century, so I'd rather do separate chapters. When it is much better I write a chapter apart with the analysis of the character n without conflicting with the main narration. So I notice at the beginning of each chapter whether the chapter is going to be special or not. But now I was saddened by this review because you clearly did not read the opening notes of the chapters and gave me an evaluation anyway. I hope you have understood what I meant, but next time send the comment, then I'll explain. Still, thanks for reading the story and for commenting. Xoxo
Good afternoon! I understand, so you can read again from chapter 16, which will continue with the same narrative from the other chapters. When the narrative changes, I will tell you at the beginning of the chapter or at the end of the previous chapter. Xoxo
Lonely_traveler:i still like the story i have it bookmarked but im saying i got real confused through chapter 11-15 everything else was good