Comments of chapter undefined of Raiden's Storm (ASOIAF)

So stupid..forced af and really done poorly. Just added drama for no reason..kinda ruined whole thing Author was dumb af for this chapter

this ending was very rushed, and don't tell me it was something "natural".

The worst thing seen in every story. MC's love interest dies in a very sudden, rushed, illogical manner, so that MC can "grow as a person" or some bs like that.... This was unnecessary drama

great another emo fic...

Well that was a let down called it a couple of chapters back to knew she was going to die

This was very forced

isn't he practically locked as mortal enemy or Raiden now?

Either he killed her , raiden shogun killed her or one of thr gods did red god most likely

This was hard to read

coward. idiot. hypocrite. hysterical. Drop.

poetic, good writing and no harem. blessed are we. It does sting though because she was really well characterised.

My first question is why? So unnecessary.... he could just not have found her ship. Secondly... he was in kings landing and got struck by lightning and visibly displayed magic and the faith said nothing? The maesters? No one? Then it happens to the ship and they say oh well?

Voy hacer como si este capítulo no existiera

And now he’s no better than his father pine after the one who was taken patheticAnd now he’s no better than his father pine after the one who was taken pathetic

This was good... better than her getting married with another random on a ridiculous drama. The only problem i have is how barely no one reacts to those lightings. I mean... its not normal.

El peor capítulo de este FF

Christ, what a chapter! Author sama surely knows how to make it interesting. Truth be told i dont see him being with her anyways. She was well writen and contributed well into the story. Thank you for making so well

Bruh she died in the most random reason got struck by lightning how does that even happen?!