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NexIuz1dCommentedWhat? You’re really take creative liberties with the history of Asoiaf, bran the builder was just a builder with magic compared to azor azai, the red gods champion is the world’s protagonist
There will never be another Bran. I can see why future Starks love his name so much cause even with my cheats it was a very tough match to have against him. Its was like he was the world's protagonist or avatar. He just kept on getting stronger, more creative and stronger magically.- NexIuz1dCommented
Chapter three but it’s the first chapter, already dogshit writing and author
Chapter 1 - NexIuz1dCommented
You belong in a dark place
Word count - NexIuz3dReplied to OMN1CR0N_GAMING
Not that big of a difference between them, don’t tell any Asian that tho
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They don’t sell goldenheart, any Asoiaf author should know that, it’s only given through gifts or to natives of the island
Among them are their bows and arrows. They are made from a special wood called Goldenheart. I managed to secure a deal with one of the merchants to sell me one sapling of Goldenheart a day before my - NexIuz5dCommented
I tried to finish this chapter but I am actually stopping here
If killing Maelys Blackfire made Ser Barristan a legend then rescueing the king made him untouchable. The same can be said that The Defiance of Duskendale made Ser Mihawk a legend too but of a different scale. He was seen as the warrior reborn. - NexIuz5dCommented
This is the end of the story for me, I expected a stronger mc then whatever this is, the normal Asoiaf mountain could take on dozens of men alone
Ser Hawkeye was barely on his feet standing with a sword lodged into his stomach. His blade Yoru in his right arm held tight you could see his knuckles whiten. Still looking at them defiantly like he was sure he would kill them all in his condition. - NexIuz5dCommented
A few weeks? And now the dukes son rushes ahead destroying propriety and he has grown big from a few weeks ago? Isn’t he 16? Theres no crazy growth for that age
Seeing his instructor, who had left weeks before them, Paul came and hugged the Man, " Duncan." Paul called out in excitement. " Ahh, young pup, you have gotten big," Duncan said. Paul separated from him, checked himself up and down, and asked, "Really?" a chuckle escaped his mouth. " No," Duncan answered. - NexIuz5dCommented
Good it’s Skyrim, just like you don’t chose to reincarnate into a black man during the early 1700’s, you don’t go to Skyrim as anything but a nord
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Weird condition considering that’s how breeding works
There was one condition on this he would have 1 of the features of the secondary races he chooses. - NexIuz5dCommented
That’s like 8 wishes but okay
2 Body Customisation: He was given three races to choose, 1 main and 2 secondary, he was also given 2 passive and 3 active skills of his chosen race. - NexIuz5dCommented
I’m scared to learn what etc is referring to here
1 System: it's a system like the one in Skyrim but it has some other features like Shop, Loan, etc... - NexIuz5dCommented
Loan is another trashy Asian system thing, one I’ve never seen in a English fanfic
1 System: it's a system like the one in Skyrim but it has some other features like Shop, Loan, etc... - NexIuz5dCommented
Yeah trash Asian dialogue, I’ve seen this sentence too many times in actual Asian fanfics
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Not really incomparable
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Not even one chapter, not even 10 sentences and the Asian dialogue strikes again
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