It's like author never read a fanfic before. So sister just random disappears the he sleeps and goes to Naruto verse. Sister stabbed in middle town by assassin right when he opens eyes. Yeah right. Village rain ain't bloody mist. Whole foundation is stupid and cliche. Now garbage chapter 3 just pushes it to not even worth trying. Plus no memories in 12 or so old body lmao dumbest shyt ever

So very cliche start already. We will see

Hope this continues but 5 day wait for that short af chapter was annoying. Not a good sign Sadly

Most rh3 reviews fake af or seem paid or something. Quality is shyt. Baits r18 for the simps ove rand over. Everything is so rushed. It's pretty trash tbh

Hope it's not too irregular. I've heard these type of excuses before so let's see

So a translation or chat gtp ??

Why is his nidoking dark.purple when it's a shiny. Kinda confused when shiny nodoking is blue I thought

So most of beginning worthless because it all gets taken and just nerf or fk over Mc. Yeah lame start..

Sounds like a excuse to just keep zoro and some luffys crew same and not have to change alot of things. We will see tho

It's more that it ruins flow and also its word count padding. Author section for a reason

Seems interesting just chapters way too short to be a full chapter to me.

Feel like filler. Was already bad enough with most last chapter a waste aswell. Swear all these system stories just to pad word count constantly instead of actual story. 2 useless af chapters

Some nice word count padding with whole useless exercise list plus system list.

Kinda feel like ai writing involved in this. Way too much inner monologue and narrating instead of actual dialogue happening. With how long it was not apot actual went on that matters

Nice. good see this reuploaded. Hope we get more than 1 chapter a day since it's being 10 months waiting ot I'm out. Just wouldn't be worth when just ditch again

For being 21 chapters not alot going on. Kinda meh and stretched out.

Doesn't matter if he wasn't brittish. All the banks of gringotts are connected and universal. Wouldn't have to go there.

Idk about this. It's written well but author already has some short af chapters that seem like he cut in half to just stretch shyt out and pad chapter count. 5 chapters in and not alot going on. He trains some and going be on af. He has system. Story will be decent if author sticks to a good upload schedule and do3snt stretch scenes out or cut chapt3rs to just pad word count and chapter count like 80% these authors do now. Acting like 1k words is alot l9l

Super short for a 18 day wait lol hope we get some actual stable uploads now

I hope short almost useless chapters don't become a common thing. Wasn't enough here to really make it a chapter.