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I think you should have put your opinion on why William becoming a King is a bad idea in the story from the start, why he cannot replicate a War of Conquest that made Aegon King, why did he choose to save Rhaenys to later kill Rhaenyra... Basically explain his thought process and the reason he chose to go this route... I agree that there are better choices if he really wanted to maximize gains
A pity that MC's third son was a female. If it were a male, House Celtigar might have gotten the hand of Helaena Targaryen. And if Viserys intends for Rhaenyra to reign as Queen, why did he chose his second son to marry Rhaena, instead of his eldest son Aegon?
Both Rhaenyra and Aegon had a claim, one as a chosen heir and the other as eldest male. Viserys should have not married again if he intended for Rhaeyra to rule anyways. Dragonlord Valyrians might have been doing marriage of eldest sister to eldest brother to avoid succession crisis with older sisters. When dragons exist, physical prowess would be less important so women could also rise to positions of power
If Killer B is 10 years old, it is definetely too early. I would have waited for him to be at least 14-15 years old, already Chunin-Jonin levels. And even then, the 3rd Raikage is still alive, Hachibi's rival for a lot of years, who recently "won" the fight by sealing him again. Any person would be reluctant to follow orders of your rival/enemy and the true person responsible of your incarciration. Hachibi would have mellowed out more after 3rd Raikage's death, with his son A being more soft on Killer B and their sibling relationship.
No Calm mind?
Ouff, wasn't he just a teen? A pity.