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OllieZ

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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2h
    Commented

    This version is much better. Thank you author!

    Ch 20 Chapter 20
    Superior Reed Richards
    Anime & Comics · Arcane_Eso
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ6h
    Commented

    I need to reread this. I think. Am I the only one who had a hard time understanding what was happening?

    Ch 20 Chapter 20
    Superior Reed Richards
    Anime & Comics · Arcane_Eso
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ12d
    Commented

    My prediction: MC will marry Elia, who will birth him some children, but will die by the time the Rebellion happens. Then he will marry Cersei, or maybe even Lyanna (most likely not)

    Ch 28 Defiance of Duskendale I
    Robert I Baratheon
    Book&Literature · DaoistWDfd8h
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2mth
    Commented

    Legolas' twin sword are not suitable for being an inheritable heirloom. They don't have crossguard ideal for duels, and I doubt his descendants will have the ability to use dual swords. The shorter range is not ideal either for fighting while horse/dragon riding.

    Ch 21 Changes
    HOTD- Family above All
    Book&Literature · Vencha
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2mth
    Commented

    With all the buildup I was hoping for some accident/surprise to happen tbh.

    Ch 31 Chapter 31: Of Tourneys and Tournaments - 112 AC
    The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale [REUPLOAD]
    TV · Giver_Of_Crabs_165
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2mth
    Commented

    A violet egg? So not a canon one... Unkown who hatched it as well...

    Ch 31 Chapter 31: Of Tourneys and Tournaments - 112 AC
    The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale [REUPLOAD]
    TV · Giver_Of_Crabs_165
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2mth
    Commented

    A pity that MC's third son was a female. If it were a male, House Celtigar might have gotten the hand of Helaena Targaryen. And if Viserys intends for Rhaenyra to reign as Queen, why did he chose his second son to marry Rhaena, instead of his eldest son Aegon?

    Ch 29 Chapter 29: On Matters of State - 112 AC
    The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale [REUPLOAD]
    TV · Giver_Of_Crabs_165
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2mth
    Replied to Ismir_Atreides

    Both Rhaenyra and Aegon had a claim, one as a chosen heir and the other as eldest male. Viserys should have not married again if he intended for Rhaeyra to rule anyways. Dragonlord Valyrians might have been doing marriage of eldest sister to eldest brother to avoid succession crisis with older sisters. When dragons exist, physical prowess would be less important so women could also rise to positions of power

    "But you are more than that," Laena interjected. "You are the rightful heir to the Iron Throne."
    The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale [REUPLOAD]
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2mth
    Commented

    omg I missed this fic!

    Ch 26 Chapter 26: A Celebration for Men - 111 AC
    The Crab's Dance - A Celtigar's Tale [REUPLOAD]
    TV · Giver_Of_Crabs_165
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2mth
    Commented

    Thanks! It was time for MC to get some luck! :D With all the Macho Braces, I hope Machoke can become Top Silver, and use the evolution to Gold :3

    Ch 51 Chapter 50 : A Surprise Encounter
    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2mth
    Commented

    Ouff, doing an info dump in the middle of a multiple-chapter scene is not the best. It slow downs the story a lot, you could do the info dump later

    Ch 19 Journey of the Stormlands (3)
    Game of Thrones: House of Tarth
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2mth
    Commented

    We will know their potential soon huh... I'm hoping for a Silver Machoke, Gold Rhydon and Platinum Kadabra, but it most likely is Bronze-Silver-Gold...

    Ch 49 Chapter 48 : Harvest!
    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2mth
    Replied to readerbecamewriter

    If Killer B is 10 years old, it is definetely too early. I would have waited for him to be at least 14-15 years old, already Chunin-Jonin levels. And even then, the 3rd Raikage is still alive, Hachibi's rival for a lot of years, who recently "won" the fight by sealing him again. Any person would be reluctant to follow orders of your rival/enemy and the true person responsible of your incarciration. Hachibi would have mellowed out more after 3rd Raikage's death, with his son A being more soft on Killer B and their sibling relationship.

    Ch 47 The Attack II
    Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World
    Anime & Comics · readerbecamewriter
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2mth
    Commented

    Hachibi shouldn't be so easily cooperating that early with Kumo. Before Killer B, he used to rampage, and even is the one responsible for the 3rd Raikage's self inflicted wound.

    Ch 47 The Attack II
    Martial Grandmaster in Naruto World
    Anime & Comics · readerbecamewriter
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ2mth
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    Ch 35 Chapter 35
    Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
    Book&Literature · Basso2142
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ3mth
    Commented

    No Calm mind?

    Kadabra, be sharp. You'll be the one providing support to Rhydon."
    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ3mth
    Commented

    Ouff, wasn't he just a teen? A pity.

    'No...', Beef's last thoughts rattled in his lonesome head as the image of those golden irises with reptilian pupils reared its head once more.
    Marvel : A Reptilian Adventure
    Anime & Comics · Marine0IQ
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ3mth
    Commented
    Chapter 34
    Pokemon Efficient Master (EM)
    Book&Literature · Basso2142
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ3mth
    Commented

    If this really is a Death World, Healing moves like Rest and Recover are a must. Evasion/Defense as well

    Ch 41 Chapter 40 : The Grand Heist - First Attempt!
    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972
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  • OllieZ
    OllieZ3mth
    Commented

    What about those Pokemon that don't evolve? They can't use the push of evolution to improve their talent. Another example of the disadvantages of the Talent System, it makes single stage Pokemon very non desirable, even if they were already unpopular IRL.

    Ch 38 Chapter 37 : Meaning behind the gift
    Pokemon - The Timeless Journey
    Anime & Comics · DemiGod_2972
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