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  • SHCH7
    SHCH77d
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    Man!! What a disappointing chapter. This story was good for 49 chapters, but the last 2 chapters were stupid. Also, the last chapter made it seem like hundreds of jounin had accused him. Now, there were only 2.... Seriously, Hiruzen is "powerless" and has to hold a trial against a Kage level ninja for 2 jounin??? The most disappointing is the MC.... 70℅ template should not only be strength and jutsus, it should also be politics, diplomacy, how to speak and charm, etc. If Tsunade hadn't shown up, would the MC have remained quiet and accepted everything....

    Ch 71 Chapter 71 Support
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH78d
    Replied to Doctor_Blue

    +1

    Ch 70 Chapter 70 Powerless Sarutobi
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH78d
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    This story was going so good. But then this chapter seemed so stupid. 1. MC is a war hero, and Kage level ninja. They should be trying to win his loyalty, instead of antagonising him. 2. Hiruzen being powerless to stop the trial is stupid. How many situations in cannon were sweeped under the rug by Hiruzen and Danzo. And don't say about "witnesses". If Hiruzen really wanted it swept under the rug, he could have said anything and it would be believed. 3. The family part- After this trial thing, MC should honestly tell them that he just came back from war as a hero, and if they care more about honor than him, then he'll have nothing to do with them.....

    Ch 70 Chapter 70 Powerless Sarutobi
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH78d
    Commented

    50% of Tobirama was enough to defeat Kage level. So, 70% should be more than enough to intimidate Hiruzen if needed. Remember, it was only after Hashirama and Tobirama's death, that everyone started calling themselves strongest (Onoki, Hiruzen, Hanzo of the Salamander, etc.). Earlier, they didn't have the guts to do it. It would be good if the MC doesn't accept this like Sakumo did in cannon....

    Ch 69 Chapter 69 Anger
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH716d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 34 Chapter 32 "The time has come!"
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    After signing in for Ten years, Uchiha begged me to come out .
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH719d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter. It seems like you're purposely being dramatic. In one and half year time skip, he didn't face a Kage level shinobi even once?

    Ch 55 Chapter 55 Rejecting
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH722d
    Commented

    Noice! Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 20 Chapter 20 Then, let me thank you, Third Hokage....He said mockingly.
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH722d
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    Thanks for the chapter. I hope he destroys Shisui in a one-sided slaughter.

    Ch 17 Chapter 17 "Lord Third Hokage is right, I am willing to accept"
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH727d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 49 Chapter 49 Bijudama
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH727d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 23 British PM visit
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH729d
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 47 Chapter 47 Roshi's Strength
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH71mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 43 Chapter 43 Troubles
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH71mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 41 Chapter 41 Iwagakure
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH71mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 31 Where will you go?
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH71mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 39 Chapter 39 Demonstration
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH71mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter.

    Ch 36 Hogwarts Journey
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH71mth
    Commented

    Thanks for the chapter

    Ch 29 The Path to Strength
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH71mth
    Commented

    Tftc!

    Ch 38 Chapter 38 The Grind
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH71mth
    Replied to SHCH7

    Anyway, since you mentioned that they won't appear again, I think it doesn't matter.

    Ch 35 Dealing with Dursleys
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  • SHCH7
    SHCH71mth
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    Thanks for the chapter. So, he sent the Dursleys away, without punishment, and even have them monetary rewards (company shares, house). You gave your reasons, but shouldn't there be consequences to actions. It's almost the same situation with Snape- "he's spying for us, so he's redeemed"; or Malfoys- "they left Voldy in the end, so they should be forgiven"... No, that doesn't/shouldn't excuse their actions, right?

    Ch 35 Dealing with Dursleys
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