Comments of chapter undefined of Modern family: The Natural Born Singer

you shouldnt made him admit it, it makes no sense, you should've had him say he was innocent and then he was sent to jail by the lack of proof of his innocence, admiting it only makes the situation worse, even if he is proven innocent people will wonder why he admitted it

Lost me here having him admit to r*pe when he did nothing wrong there was 0 reason except to force angst into the story best of luck with the rest but you killed it for me.

Good book but It's starting to get messy, I'd suggest you don't do unnecessary drama like what just happened and actually think It out (Cuz although I dislike drama, I would want actual thought out logical drama, and not, well, this). Also, If you do do drama again, don't make It ch3ating please because that's what wattpad Is for (And You are probably updating on there as well {Just a guess but It feels like u are} so fair enough and you don't have to listen but It would be nice to get drama that Isn't ch3ating/NTR/whatever all the time).

This ruins the story. If you really wanted a prison arc, it’s much more compelling to have an innocent person who loudly professes their innocence be sent to prison. Pleading guilty destroys all character development. You didn’t provide any motivation behind it either. It’s just so dumb. Plus, he would have likely won the case. She would have had to prove beyond all reasonable doubt. Against all odds if he was found guilty due to forced plot…And going to prison with a not guilty plea with a guilty verdict….he could sue the state for police violence for attacking you during your arrest, sue Corinne for falsely accusing you, sue the state for going to prison as an innocent person. He could have got millions of dollars in damages.

Terrible You just butchered your story. What on earth were you thinking? Forced Pity party? You can expect to see this story drop in reviews. Like why ?

was pretty weird that he admitted to it only reason i can see why you did that was to give him a reason to make some songs that he couldn't make with an easy life like he had before . im still sticking around seeing how it goes but just wanted to say i found it weird xd

The only thing i don’t like about the chapter is that you didn’t show anything after being released. I just hope is not going to be one of those awfull novel breaker thing when you start feeding what happend with little flashbacks. Also hope that he is suing for defamation.

terribly forced drama as I figured it would be. the rest of the story is great and I can tell you are a good author but I cant get passed how illogical this all is, shouldn't sacrifice quality for drama to push the plot. Good luck with your story in the future.

You're now on like season 6-7 now because all the time skips.

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I usually read all modern family fics no matter how bad the writing is but I have to drop this dumb trashy zero making sense fiction.

Also, please don’t pick anymore mid songs like Ross Lynch. Can you try to pick songs that were actually hits on the Billboard top 40 Hot 100 chart? Picking something from Camp Rock from an actor with a lousy music career? No thanks. Go with Shawn Mendes, Ed Sheeran, Lukas Graham, Lewis Capaldi, Hozier, Taylor Swift, etc. TL;DR: please don’t pick songs by failed musicians like Ross Lynch.

You have no right to write this good of a story and just leave us hanging like that 😭

Did you drop this ff, it’s ok read just needed some fix ups but still a good read. Don’t quit because people tell you to quit only quit because you want to!

Welp, I'm out, at least you saved 20mins of boredom. That ra e allegation did nothing for the story whatsoever. Pure nonsense drama that did nothing. Terrible fic, and I'm tolerant with most, trust me, I read MTL chinese fics and actually enjoy them.

You spoiled my good mood, and my expectations for this novel....you crossed the line with this chapter

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Thanks for the chapter!

The pacing is everywhere, and the character development is virtually nonexistent. Not to mention the admission of guilt of nowhere. Good luck with your story, but this is where I get off.