Love this “character growth” bullshit mediocre authors trying to stand out from the OP MC stories try to pull. Bro just admit your a masochist that loves to have a weak mc get abused. It’s okay to admit your bedroom kinks. I know you’re going for this whole deep soul binding character driven perspective slice of life shit, Your place is on Archive your own or watt pad or something. Keep getting yourself off to this weak willed bitch of an mc. Being encouraged by the bottom feeders that make up 50% of Genshin fanbase when all they want is slice of life cooking fics must do wonders for your ego. Disgusting masochistic filth.

Love this “character growth” bullshit mediocre authors trying to stand out from the OP MC stories try to pull. Bro just admit your a masochist that loves to have a weak mc get abused. It’s okay to admit your bedroom kinks. I know you’re going for this whole deep soul binding character driven perspective slice of life shit, Your place is on Archive your own or watt pad or something. Keep getting yourself off to this weak willed bitch of an mc. Being encouraged by the bottom feeders that make up 50% of Genshin fanbase when all they want is slice of life cooking fics must do wonders for your ego. Disgusting masochistic filth.

Love this “character growth” bullshit mediocre authors trying to stand out from the OP MC stories try to pull. Bro just admit your a masochist that loves to have a weak mc get abused. It’s okay to admit your bedroom kinks. I know you’re going for this whole deep soul binding character driven perspective slice of life shit, Your place is on Archive your own or watt pad or something. Keep getting yourself off to this weak willed bitch of an mc. Being encouraged by the bottom feeders that make up 50% of Genshin fanbase when all they want is slice of life cooking fics must do wonders for your ego. Disgusting masochistic filth.

This pity party is just grating on my nerves now. Start adding angst and drama to the tags if you going to continue with this pity vent “development”

More. Must have more!!! Patreon ? Please have one? Need just one more!!!! MOREEEEE!!!!

Really 40% smut welp there goes my interest.

Where’s the next chapters?

No. It’s always her. Every god forsaken story it’s her. A resounding 2.

It’s sad because it’s better than 90% of the harem trash and plagiarism you come across on this website. It’s disgusting how ChatGPT actually preferable over authors.

People need to keep their kinks to the bedroom. It’s fucking disgusting how “authors” love a weak mc for the sake of “growth”. Disgusting masochists. Go read worm fiction or something.

You rat. You stole this from spacebattles. OMFG I’m the chosen one. Have fun getting spammed bad reviews.

Let me get this straight this uptight bitch has been harassing our mc non stop and sent him to limbo for no reason and he is the one who has apologise? Stop writing. Just stop. Complete utter trash of story. Your mc is a spineless bitch. Don’t ever have creative thought again. My god your masochistic pity party story is disgusting.

Legit trash. Like wow dude. Even for webnovel you take the cake. The fight between Zhao and our MC…. Wow Zhao shot lightning at him and our mc tried and failed to redirect it. Holy shit the forced loss. Dude I’m seriously doing you a favour get off this website and never have creative thought ever again.

Yer no one likes an mc that’s second fiddle to side characters. Please make sure that his Fate golden finger actually powers him up enough that his brothers will think twice before trying something.

How much estrogen you have to make something like this? Like holy shit dude. Too much victim crybaby. Imagine thinking Superman would stand a chance against a Viltrumite. A species that fight each other ruthlessly and constantly cull the “weak” from their people. Let alone Omni man himself. Dude is high on his dc fanboy copuim.

Great story. I hope the update stability improves but I understand that real life issues are more important. Keep up the great work. Seriously tho. Consider moving this story to spacebattles. Webnovel is the trash can of fanfics. A story like this deserves better.

Holy shit this is bad. I don’t know if it’s the bots rating 5 stars that piss me off or the awful translation or just the dogshit plot and stale Chinese dialogue.

It’s trash full stop. Typical webnovel garbage.

Love it when they dumb down everyone in order for this whole mysterious stranger persona. Hey Author have everyone internal monologue “ wHO aRE yOU” “wHErE dID hE cOmE fRoM?” “hOW dID hE gEt SuCH aN iTEm?” every two sentences please. Just so we can understand how interesting he is. And to make sure we KNOW that everyone is interested. Thanks for the 62IQ character understanding btw.

Stolen piece of shit. FUCK THIS GUY. What kind of fucking loser are you. Too pass off this as yours. You fucking scum bag. Seriously tho you are the reason this website is the trash hole of the internet.