JussMonty
I'm a simpleton. My brain can't handle complicated shit lol. If your story is readable and fits my weird criteria that even I haven't fully figured out, I will read it. Oh, I also try to write.
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JussMonty10minCommentedis he good in the show?
A helmet atop his head, which had multiple cords connecting it to the computer terminal located directly in front of him.- JussMonty12hCommentedRyan wasn't sure if his senses were working straight, but at that moment for a split three seconds he truly was afraid of his mother, not kid afraid of parent scared, but deep rooted fear from someone with power. Before he could think further on it though the feeling was gone, his mother was smiling widely again.
- JussMonty12hCommented
nah, if you do, just keep it small. I usually skip them, and I'd rather not skip an entire chapter
(A/N: Comment if I should do an R-18, not really use to doing them, but I can try if you want it.) - JussMonty14hCommented"Mmmmm..." Rubbing his chin as he looks at the boy, Naruto continued "How about we do this. I'll be taking care of your grandfather for a few months, and during the process I have to train a lot so I can be very strong and protect the ones I love... would you like to train with me?"
- JussMonty14hCommented"Same here" Swooping down from the forest with abnormal speed, Kakashi quickly arrived behind Zabuza, and with a perfect swing, kicked him hard in the head.
- JussMonty14hCommented
BrightStar
(A/N: What should the name of the company be? I was thinking something related to bright or star.) - JussMonty14hCommented
it's not talent
"But I have no idea if what I am doing is correct. I'm not talented enough to lead a tech company." - JussMonty1dCommented"And I really wish he would just talk nonsense, but..." Turning his gaze to the distance, Kakashi remained silent for a while and frowned slightly "I'll be back tomorrow, Sensei... I have something to corroborate."
- JussMonty1dCommented"I really wouldn't have the strength to go on without you... I love you, my friend."
- JussMonty2dReplied to Zailo95
yeah, I know, or they just don't finish it.
I hope this can be understood, as this being one of my first Fanfictions, I had added many ideas without thinking them through properly, but I'm not ashamed of it, as I had put my enthusiasm into it. I'll be adding more updates soon. - JussMonty2dCommented
focus more on the kingdom building element, I'm really lacking good Kingdom building stories, I need more
I hope this can be understood, as this being one of my first Fanfictions, I had added many ideas without thinking them through properly, but I'm not ashamed of it, as I had put my enthusiasm into it. I'll be adding more updates soon. - JussMonty2dCommented
I don't remember if the requirement to become a demon lord is to kill 10 thousand humans or if it could be any race. Because if it's the latter...
"200,000 Orcs," Rimuru muttered as he walked. That was a lot of mouths to feed, a little too many if you asked him. - JussMonty3dCommented
they're the same age, unless that's just how he talks
"We'll have to talk about it privately but it's looking good, lad," Aquaman replied. - JussMonty3dCommented
Do people actually do this?
"HEH NOW SAY THAT AGAIN JINGER!" The black dude smirked with confidence while pointing the gun towards the white guy. "Do you know what gang i am part of?!" He threatened. - JussMonty3dCommented
His actions outside of the village will make him a criminal though...
"I intend to do something that will shock the world, perhaps it will set the whole world against me, do you want that?" Naruto asked to make sure she knew what she was getting into. - JussMonty3dCommented
He was never a ninja, so leaving the village is not a crime. But given what Guy saw, Minato will connect the dots eventually, and so will other higher-ups. I wonder what he'll do then?
"You always made it clear, but what I'm going to do and where I'm going will make me a criminal to Konoha, do you want that?" He asked, since even hiding his strength all these years, he would be discovered at some point and even having no ties to the ninja system of the village, he could be considered a deserter even by his own father, who is the Hokage. - JussMonty3dCommented
why do people go out of their way to make him evil? He just became an incompetent Hokage in his old age. He's like Joe Biden. If you want to make him evil, then mark this world as an AU.
As Tsunade went to tell her grandmother, Hiruzen tried to hide the sinister smile on his face. - JussMonty5dCommentedMake bricks without straw.
- JussMonty6dCommented
maybe the new dojutsu is just a sharingan with the extra ability to control blood. Keep it simple.
"Yeah, most probably you grand child will awaken new dojutsu. Like my daughter, she awakens byaringan, the combination of Sharingan and Byakugan," replied Setsuna. - JussMonty6dReplied to glenThe ROB said looking down to the soul " Normally that would be the case but the thing is you have been staying here for an unknown amount of time. You may have been erased in the data of the Record"