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DetachedDreamer

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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer3d
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    ya looks like he'll be boring forever. smh

    Ch 6 Chapter 6: The Sisters of Fate? The Last Resort
    DC: Superman's OP Younger Brother
    TV · Perfect_Genius
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer3d
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    Hands down one of the worst MCs you can read about. hes boring, impatient, emotionless, he gives dead stares, and thats really it. he does love his parents I guess thats something. I mean there's trash then there's this MC. hes worries about batman. trashes on him. he wants to be low key. he gets annoyed when folk ask him questions. I could go on on how bad of an MC this author created but I only read a few chapters. im scared to read more. the story itself would of been awesome if you had a completely different MC. but here we are. this author has been totally corrupted by the fanfic ideology on this app. so sad. because he seems to have talent but with MCs like this its doomed to fail.

    DC: Superman's OP Younger Brother
    TV · Perfect_Genius
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer3d
    Commented

    so sad he's being low key and he thinks batman is a psycho? the MC's pathetic for that

    'I really don't want anyone else knowing even a bit about my powers, especially not a paranoid psycho like Batman, but if I don't give this a shot, i'll have to use my last resort, Sigh!,' Ray thought as he contemplated his next move.
    DC: Superman's OP Younger Brother
    TV · Perfect_Genius
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer3d
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    Ch 24 update
    Reborn as klaus Mikaelson at the beginning of Originals
    TV · Beelze1
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer3d
    Commented

    garbage

    Ch 1 Chapter 1
    Harry Potter: Please Graduate From Hogwarts Soon and Go Away!
    Book&Literature · FFAddict
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer3d
    Replied to InternetSaint

    lol anyone who sees politics in the stuff they don't like are sad, angry, and pathetic. Politics suck. liberals are trash and so are conservatives. this story might suck but we all know you do too. you don't use Google and the multitude of verified articles to research? wait youre not one those anti vaxxers who thinks everything is a conspiracy? ignorant folk question everything yet seek no answers. lol Jesus christ. American Media is trash but you sound very much like a fox News guys. which is no worse than an NBC or CNN guy. stop b*tching about liberals. I bet you use the word beta and simp every day too. Zero friend having *ss. you're on Instagram every day screaming "F*cking Liberals" on random cooking videos because they added to much spice. lolololol

    Harry Potter: Dimensional Wizard
    Book&Literature · LazySageDao
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer3d
    Replied to OddOne99

    a walking dead story without any of the cast is just another zombie story. Might as well make an original story instead. The villians of the story can only carry this story so far without the drama that put them in conflict in the first place.

    Ch 10 Consequences
    My New Life in The Walking Dead
    TV · SocioPhobia
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer4d
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    Great story all around. im a big fan of the internet/multiversal Cafe genre and this definitely helps satisfy my fix. I like the changes made so far to the story and how its proceeded so far. I wish it updated more often but we cant have everything. Keep up the good work.

    Mustafu Hyper Tech Internet Cafe
    Anime & Comics · FrozenCog
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer4d
    Replied to Bobby_pierce

    the story says he won't be by fairy tail or its members? does that change and he gets involved with the plot or is this just about another side quester?

    Fairy Tail: Wandering Beast
    Anime & Comics · Indra_effect7020
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer4d
    Commented

    wow this author is still updating this trash can of a story

    Ch 196 Ch-196 War nears.
    Naruto: Blind Hyuga
    Anime & Comics · Hkj
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer4d
    Commented

    what a stupid story lol Jesus people will try anything nowadays

    Ch 46 What a strange spiritual world
    Homelander is in DC
    Anime & Comics · OasisTL
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer5d
    Commented

    so we need to pay more to include more stories in your pat reon? it's not an all inclusive thing but rather separate purchases?

    Ch 46 Chapter 46: Ino
    Naruto Online: The Strongest Shinobi
    Anime & Comics · Fat_Cultivator
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer6d
    Replied to ERFAN

    I can't disagree but anyone who uses the word beta or alpha are closet gays.

    Red Nara
    Anime & Comics · l_legolas
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer6d
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    I think the story is great and I honestly can't criticize anything outside of the MC and even then only one thing. Great plot, I love the instant fate breaking actions, Uzumaki and nara mix was a great choice. The MC is great too. I've love his actions at saving his clan. only real problem is the tiny d*ck energy he gives off when he's grooming kushina and hating on Minato. It seems more like insecurity and self esteem issues towards Minato more than anything but in this AU Minato is probably everything the MC claims he is but you still can't help but notice the extra hate that only seems to stem from an inferiority complex, you'd assume, even if it isn't. it just feels that way since he stole the chick of the guy he has a hard on for hating. its not hard to look past yet but once kushina goes to school I have no doubt the MC/author will be there to bash him excessively. God i hope the main enemies aren't just the higher ups of the village because that's been so overused. Story is still developing even after so many chapters so we will have to wait and see. ill definitely reevaluate the story in the future. but its definitely worth giving a read.

    Red Nara
    Anime & Comics · l_legolas
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer6d
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    The story is alright but the R.O.B. stuff goes on for 4 chapters and you just hope the God will shut up as soon as possible but he doesn't. the author tries to inject emotional situations into the story but they are horrbily forced, from the no-option, option about his family to Yamamoto and his adopted son; comes out of no where, no build up, and in scenarios they don't fit. Grammar isn't great. lots of missing words or unfinished sentences. spacing errors. if you get past all that there is an intriguing plot and characters that havent been applied in this manner. it has potential if the authors writing gets better but at this point its just average.

    Naruto: The Hima clan
    Anime & Comics · The_Legit_Writer
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer6d
    Replied to The_Legit_Writer

    man the R.O.B. wouldn't shut the F*ck up. i like the story and it seems like a 4.6 or 4.8 but would of been a 5 without the no-option, option about his family and the god that seems to yap forever. the emotions shown just seemed forced and fake with him trying to say sorry and goodbye to his fam. like no, tell that God to f*ck off for even bringing it up if his fam wouldn't remember him. that would of been the normal response. but you forced his tears instead.

    Naruto: The Hima clan
    Anime & Comics · The_Legit_Writer
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer6d
    Posted

    seems like it has potential but its definitely off-putting and weird how adult like all the children are. there is no scenario or amount of wealth that could cultivate such mature mindsets in children so young. it just makes you wish they aged already so it doesn't look so creepy. other than that the story is fine, I like the shows introduced and the origin. I appreciate the authors attempt at melding these worlds together and adjusting what's needed to make it work. overall a good story so far but still pretty early for an extensive review.

    Between TV shows (the OC, Gossip Girl, House m.d... )
    TV · BRIHUA
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer6d
    Replied to ZonicZ

    man. such a good idea for a system and world but thanks for heads up, I won't even waste my time on it.

    Empire of Winter: Sam's New Dawn (GOT FF)
    TV · Alak_Samba
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer6d
    Replied to Morning_Fragrance

    lol anyone who 1 stars a story has emotional issues. looks like you need a hero in your life!

    Marvel: The Death Surgeon
    Movies · Charizard6
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  • DetachedDreamer
    DetachedDreamer6d
    Posted

    Great story do far. pretty unique relative to other fanfics. I like the characters and powers. I definitely hope he takes more action in the future but I think we eventually will, there's more focus on character growth at the moment but thats just as important. Definitely should give it a try. Only thing thats lacking is grammar but its not enough to hurt the rating in my opinion. Keep up the good work.

    DC: Leave my Cat alone
    Anime & Comics · Fat_Cultivator
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