you're taking the same Peter from the comics and writing him in you're own storyline? so like a variant. I guess that could be interesting. as long as its Peter's personality.

youre a f*cking idiot lol

guy who wrote this review definitely has been brainwashed. lol learned all his comic book knowledge on here. and gave a 1 star. thats how you know you aren't a real person. I havent even read the story. didn't need to. lol your words told me everything I needed to know.

Jesus, this story sounds horrible thank you ill pass

lol the fact that you get folk to pay you for reading a shitty translation makes you a boss! and the true villian. lol folk actually pay for this. you're a mad genius. stealing folks money like its nothing.

all the mistakes in the synopsis scare me already.

This story needs more than a translator. it needs an editor. and it needs a new MC. 96% of asian MCs in translated stories like this are all the same, garbage. if you translate garbage then you take responsibility for garbage. the idea of the story is amazing but thats literally it. I think something is wrong in the head of the OG writer but choosing to translate a lazy, poor version in english is its own kind of crazy. but so is anyone translating a story without the correct level of English to do so. I gave it a chance but man. run.

he's an artist. lol he literally chose the lady killer role or whatever. so that's him? or does this flawed logic just apply randomly? its a rock audience, its called adapting and growing. lol now he's worried about not being himself? what in the stupid? Math ain't mathin.

technically none of your songs have been pure rock so far. Sub genre's at best. you can't just throw punk, country, and alternative music around to make it rock, because a rock concert means rock n roll, not punk or alternative, I love all of em but there's a big difference. I mean you can say its the same and try but the cadence and words will always give it away even if you exchange an acoustic guitar for an electric one. There are so many great rock and roll songs. why choose other genre and force it? makes zero sense. plz don't change a rock song into rap later. lol I like original songs so I can listen to em while I skim over it instead of having to read the butchered version that avoids copyright. so think about it.

authors and translators of stories like these hate themselves.

ya every author I've seen just ride sukuna'a d*ck all day. once you saw the cover you should of ran. 😆 not one good sukuna story in existence.

every church and army in the world make the will of fire look like a joke. church death count probably a few thousand times more than all the ninja to ever live in naruto.

lol approved? what else would he do? you can be sad about em dying but there was only one choice when you're hungry, poor, and alone. are you one of those folk who would of cussed if he let the birds live? lord Jesus. lol 😆

The story is decent and I think it deserves a read before judging it but I feel like there is just something off about this story. mostly the MC. his reaction to everything is so off. You can't really relate to him at all. He gets scared, nervous, brave, then reckless in moments, all almost at the same time. no real intelligence behind it. not the way anyone considered a genius with a memory like his would react. Especially considering he could only do 5 push ups. that was enough for him to face three apprentices of Master Peng. Not to mentioned he literally gets the saitama treatment by a younger master peng who was in high school. one punch death. so far he hasn't show an ounce of potential or being reasonable. he loses his first two fights because he acted the way no rational person would act. most children aren't that stupid. I just think the author tried to throw in all these emotions just to show he's young and inexperienced but its done so sloppy that it just seems off, like he might be a bit mentally unstable, not an emotional child. No one wants to read about a mentally handicap child, nothing personal. other than that I like the setting of the story and ill keep reading and if it improves ill revise my review.

a body designed to withstand Chakra can probably do 5 push ups on their death bed.

5 push ups as a 4 year old? in a magical ninja world? why is he weaker than every other person his age thst isn't a civilian or is this an AU?

no way. his soul would take that shame to every life after this one. aint no coming back from that. lol every time he acts hard im going to remember he got the Saitama treatment from a high-schooler.

sounds like the MC is a carbon copy of 90% of MCs found on this app. boring an MC with no personality, sounds like a drag. or is he different?

such a let down

This was one of my most highly anticipated fanfics. I was a big fan of Smallville. sadly I was sorely let down. This is just about an mc who is a side character in someone else's story. hes an outsider. no friends. no meaningful relationships. I say none because his presence has never actually changed any of the plot, maybe some small details between plot events BUT LITERALLY NEVER CHANGED ONE EVENT. any story where the plot doesn't change is at most a 3 star story. His GF, who I loved originally, is a joke now. she still thinks he's some human? she's an angel. and he flies and super speeds everywhere. Clark still does the same stuff. dad still dies. they do train earlier than the OG but thats not important. the same people died as the original. when it comes down to it, nothing has really happened that he's done thats of any note. fighting some criminals as a police officer. which has done nothing. Big let down. who wants to read about a side character who brings nothing new to the actually story? just watch Smallville, its better.