Comments of chapter undefined of The Author's POV
The Author's POV
Entrail_JI
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I hate when authors try to force a villain. Sorry but Evervlood is too forced and unrealistic. Yes you explained how this and that led to the outcome but that doesn't detract from how unrealistic it feels. The villain feels too one dimensional,you're telling of all the things that happened to him and all the potential enemies and fellow demons he met, this guy decides to obsess over MC without a proper background and character development? If he already recovered and has the means to increase his power, clearly the initial "set back" he had due to the MC isn't that huge of a deal. The story do far is decently written and fleshed out so it's frustrating when you go the lazy way and force a villain, lets not even talk about Mathew. Barely seen him in the story snd already made to be a headache type villian..
I didnt like this chapter. The whole everblood INSTANTLY knowing when another demon goes somewhere , insantly knowing the wholeplot, and very fast drawing conclusions about ren.. it seems forced. I understand the author wants to make everblood stronger and becoming a proper antagonist but it feels it could have been done more organically. The whole "he's gone rogue" could have been done differently, with , at the very least , a bit more character development. Anyway just my two cents for the author , i really like the novel very much... i just feel bad guy "super obsessin" over MC is always less natural than "you're in the way of what i want to accomplish" .
There are still a lot of loopholes and pretty much cliche part but 👌 is fine. I've already read a lot of Chinese Xianxias and wuxias so I just kinda thought of those part like them... The whole plot for this chapter is really exciting though the characters became generic. Like you can just say "I can't wait to know what will happen next" kind of thing since I wanna know if it'll still goes like how it usually goes in other novels for this type of setting.
