What i like about this novel is the unique blend. The mc is evil but likeable, things dont always go his way It has some H scenes. But no, they are no very common, a rarety actually, and quite well done. The world background is deep, interesting and well thought. There is no "harem" but the mc likes a fling every know and then. It is by no means his motivation and woman are certainly not dumb about him. Overall very very refreshing approach . I wish more stories would include some spicy stuff without BEING about spicy stuff. The mc's powers are overall a bit bland but still interesting nonetheless. Overall a solid recomendation.

Messi dribling skill i guess

It was too early to settle , story wise so i think its a good choice to break up. that being saId the author did manage the whole relationship at a distance rather poorly. Lets hope zach can find some fling while in italy. i do enJoy chapters that arent all about the footbal matches.

Messi did 0,92 per game on his 403 games in la liga... Making a goal a game would be beyond absurd...

I wanna see italian defenses puttinG serious pressure.

honestly the transition from the 1st chapter to the god of darkness feels a bit too abrupt, not enough is told and its not well done, the mc feels bland, without enough being told about him to make a personality, lets hope the novel improves significantly. No hate, just hoping for constructive criticism.

It Was vert poor writing, both thE pregnancy wHich made no sense and the missCarriage, which served no story purpose.

hello! im an unknown person! We just barely met. Can you give me power? Sure! i will explain it to you in a very easy to understand way so you can get power. ..... just no

ok one thing done very well is power = cost. Always a great choice.

ok first chapters where good this one has a massive info dump that could have been done in a much more organic way. Also the whole " old experienced guy understand how to speak with otherworlders in their own mental frame" is not that good.

Ok so this novel is based on a much older novel. im not a big fan of cultivation in modern World settings but here it is... lets hope its ok.

But he isnt 19. it makes no sense whatsoever... they wouldnt wear a condom??? Are we insane? It makes 0 sense for either of them to happen “accidentally” . we have more than enough methods to avoid it.Completely unbelievable and out of chracter for both.

So many silly comments... a young couple that is separated by distance, a football player Obsesed With becoming the best. its a very naturaL crysis. i do hope the author doesnt pull the pregnancy card, becaus one would think somebody like zach would always use condoms... In anycase i think its good writing, maybe it is t suposse to be stable so soon in his career.

if the single season record (including penalties ) for a champions league is 12 (only cristiano and messi both twice have done it)... isnt 18 a bit too much? oh well , fiction always pushes it a bit.

I think the pace is ok, once the season starts football is going to dominate most of the nOvel anyway. its not just the football, but his career and personal life.

Well Yes and no, could add more drama

So zach has To get everyhing right first try? Italian positioning is among the hardest things in football.

new girl?

Seems the relation is all but over. honestly zach is so hooked up with football that there is little space left in His heart. in anycase, long distance relation.. so i dont feel its that terrible, just something that happens. lets hope they break appart without too much pain.

Just wanted to say that i do appreciate the slice of life.. iT gives meaning and reasons For what happens on he field. i really enjoy understanding a youngs stars troubles, on and off the court. from finding the right team, not just play wise but story wise, having him play in more than one of the major leagues in europe, learning the culture of differences, love troubles, girls, and yes Football too! Keep it up author. the only thing i Don’t is the release speed ! But you can all winners! [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]